for What the Future Holds3/20/2006 c14 Roo
I love the fight between Ryo and Dain. =^^= And Ryo's death. For some reason there are very few books where the main characters dies right in the middle of them. XD
I love the fight between Ryo and Dain. =^^= And Ryo's death. For some reason there are very few books where the main characters dies right in the middle of them. XD
3/20/2006 c13 Roo
o_O Poor Ryo. Nobody listens to him. Woohoo, Dain! I love that evil guy. XD
o_O Poor Ryo. Nobody listens to him. Woohoo, Dain! I love that evil guy. XD
3/19/2006 c11 Roo
The piano... I love the piano. n_n;; Awesomely done, of course. I do feel bad for Ryo, but that's what you get when you let the other half of your ripped soul take over.
The piano... I love the piano. n_n;; Awesomely done, of course. I do feel bad for Ryo, but that's what you get when you let the other half of your ripped soul take over.
3/19/2006 c10 Roo
Shadow Demon with a split soul and a craving for blood. Fun, fun.
Shadow Demon with a split soul and a craving for blood. Fun, fun.
3/19/2006 c9 Roo
Great chapter! W00t, Ryo is back from the dungeons! Love the ending- another cliffhanger of evil.
Great chapter! W00t, Ryo is back from the dungeons! Love the ending- another cliffhanger of evil.
3/19/2006 c8 Roo
Again, an awesome chapter! It's all weird to read it after hearing it at camp. o_O XD Ryo's other half is awesome.
Again, an awesome chapter! It's all weird to read it after hearing it at camp. o_O XD Ryo's other half is awesome.
3/19/2006 c7 Roo
Yay! Ryo is insane!
Yay! Ryo is insane!
3/19/2006 c6 Roo
T_T It's so sad! Poor Ryo... Second death in the story. Well, besides guards and other random people, but they don't count.
T_T It's so sad! Poor Ryo... Second death in the story. Well, besides guards and other random people, but they don't count.
3/19/2006 c5 Roo
Ryo will never be able to get anything past Hito. Anyways, nice work. Sappy romance work, but still awesome(in it's own 'special way'). Poor muses... you're so cruel to them. XD
Ryo will never be able to get anything past Hito. Anyways, nice work. Sappy romance work, but still awesome(in it's own 'special way'). Poor muses... you're so cruel to them. XD
3/19/2006 c4 Roo
And now... I shall reply like I've been ordered to(and threatened about o_O). Woohoo! Izzy! God, I love Izzy.
And now... I shall reply like I've been ordered to(and threatened about o_O). Woohoo! Izzy! God, I love Izzy.
3/19/2006 c3 Roo
As always, awesome! The ending is great. n_n Cliffhangers are good...and bad. Like twinkies!
As always, awesome! The ending is great. n_n Cliffhangers are good...and bad. Like twinkies!
3/18/2006 c1 Roo
Well, this version is a lot shorter. XD I still love it(of course), but there are a few typos and such. I'll point them out to you the next time we talk. n_n
Well, this version is a lot shorter. XD I still love it(of course), but there are a few typos and such. I'll point them out to you the next time we talk. n_n
3/18/2006 c21 Beth
HAHA IM still laughing at those comments! Thats hilarious! Ah the battle...I think I remember you telling us this part at camp ((all those years ago :D)) I cant wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
HAHA IM still laughing at those comments! Thats hilarious! Ah the battle...I think I remember you telling us this part at camp ((all those years ago :D)) I cant wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
3/17/2006 c21 GalevinFierre
Nice chapter, and you were quick about this one too! "First 15 minutes of a fight" wow, though it doesn't sound like a lot, 15 minutes can seem forever in a fight if it was just the first, how long did it last? Well I'm rambling, finally some good action scenes and I hope more of your chapters come as fast as this one.
Nice chapter, and you were quick about this one too! "First 15 minutes of a fight" wow, though it doesn't sound like a lot, 15 minutes can seem forever in a fight if it was just the first, how long did it last? Well I'm rambling, finally some good action scenes and I hope more of your chapters come as fast as this one.
3/16/2006 c21 Dorin
Lol! I think that I liked the last little blurb at the very bottom separated from the rest of the story best. *snicker* Childish Ryo. Four thousand years, and he still isn't as mature as Kei half the time.
Loved the chapter! Showed how pushy Kei can be if she gets an idea in her head. Can't wait for the next chappy!
Lol! I think that I liked the last little blurb at the very bottom separated from the rest of the story best. *snicker* Childish Ryo. Four thousand years, and he still isn't as mature as Kei half the time.
Loved the chapter! Showed how pushy Kei can be if she gets an idea in her head. Can't wait for the next chappy!