for What the Future Holds3/13/2006 c20 GalevinFierre
Great Chapter! It's been a while since the last one! I found the arguments between Kei and Ryo funny, and knowing you, they'll 'hook up'. The meditation though? Wouldn't he like look like he's dead to everyone else? I just thought that was a bit odd. Well, I thought nothing particularly significant happens but I can't wait for the next chapter.
Great Chapter! It's been a while since the last one! I found the arguments between Kei and Ryo funny, and knowing you, they'll 'hook up'. The meditation though? Wouldn't he like look like he's dead to everyone else? I just thought that was a bit odd. Well, I thought nothing particularly significant happens but I can't wait for the next chapter.
3/11/2006 c19 Beth
Ah I do love this story...I would marry it if it was a person...I mean it has so many good things...like Ryo...yeaah *gets lost in thoughts* I love this chapter! haha Ryos otehr half is fun larious! woohoo...wow...
Ah I do love this story...I would marry it if it was a person...I mean it has so many good things...like Ryo...yeaah *gets lost in thoughts* I love this chapter! haha Ryos otehr half is fun larious! woohoo...wow...
3/11/2006 c18 Tis Me
You need not me to review on every one you know...You know Ill just say how awesome you are...and how much I love this story..and how your doing such a great job! haha PLease update soon...I need to know whats gonna happen!
You need not me to review on every one you know...You know Ill just say how awesome you are...and how much I love this story..and how your doing such a great job! haha PLease update soon...I need to know whats gonna happen!
3/11/2006 c20 Beth
Must you torture me with such things? Get under my skin and make me wait? I havent been able to read this story in like forever..and when its getting so good...you cut it...rip it up and stop it...*sigh* *glares* Yeah...I know patience is a virtue...*grumbles*
Must you torture me with such things? Get under my skin and make me wait? I havent been able to read this story in like forever..and when its getting so good...you cut it...rip it up and stop it...*sigh* *glares* Yeah...I know patience is a virtue...*grumbles*
3/11/2006 c20 Dorin
*sheepish grin* sowwry...Um, ok, to cover reviews for all other missed chapters: WOT! GREAT JOB!
now, with that over with, on to this chapter. Interesting touch with the little boy. lol, I felt myself having the same reaction as you wrote me having. Stupid Ryo! Attacking little children...he couldn't have just hit a pressure point or something? *pfft*
Nice lead into the next scene. XD I'll be interested to read where it goes next..."What the Future Holds" fans...hold on to your hats!
muahaha
*sheepish grin* sowwry...Um, ok, to cover reviews for all other missed chapters: WOT! GREAT JOB!
now, with that over with, on to this chapter. Interesting touch with the little boy. lol, I felt myself having the same reaction as you wrote me having. Stupid Ryo! Attacking little children...he couldn't have just hit a pressure point or something? *pfft*
Nice lead into the next scene. XD I'll be interested to read where it goes next..."What the Future Holds" fans...hold on to your hats!
muahaha
2/1/2006 c19 GalevinFierre
Great Chapter.It seems Kei is against killing people,but I tend to side with Ryo, cause I don't know about you, but when you don't kill your enemies...they tend to NOT die...and I don't know, maybe I'm old fashioned but they also tend to be kind of angry cause you beat them to within an inch of their life... For some strange reason I liked this chapter more than the others. It weird, I can't explain or point out exactly why X.X well, waiting for your next chapter
Great Chapter.It seems Kei is against killing people,but I tend to side with Ryo, cause I don't know about you, but when you don't kill your enemies...they tend to NOT die...and I don't know, maybe I'm old fashioned but they also tend to be kind of angry cause you beat them to within an inch of their life... For some strange reason I liked this chapter more than the others. It weird, I can't explain or point out exactly why X.X well, waiting for your next chapter
1/15/2006 c18 Beth
I love this so much...If this was all done and a book (( which someday it will be Im sure )) I would be so hooked that I'd be reading it all day and until like 4 in the mourning! Keep up your awsomeness and write faster!
lol
I love this so much...If this was all done and a book (( which someday it will be Im sure )) I would be so hooked that I'd be reading it all day and until like 4 in the mourning! Keep up your awsomeness and write faster!
lol
1/15/2006 c18 GalevinFierre
Yeah. Great. Cool. Spectacular. Slendid. Well done. Wonderful. Perfect. I ran out of positive words, but seriously, it was good! I still was a bit thrown off by Dain calling Ryo's scar sexy and I'm sure I'll remember that the next time I see someone with a cut anywhere on their body...still, I thought the scene with Izzy was Genius(get it Genius? Atoms? Ha! I should do stand up.)
Yeah. Great. Cool. Spectacular. Slendid. Well done. Wonderful. Perfect. I ran out of positive words, but seriously, it was good! I still was a bit thrown off by Dain calling Ryo's scar sexy and I'm sure I'll remember that the next time I see someone with a cut anywhere on their body...still, I thought the scene with Izzy was Genius(get it Genius? Atoms? Ha! I should do stand up.)
12/31/2005 c17 Dorin
w00t! Wow, is that preview WAY into the future or what?
lol, Ryo wins! (of course, we all knew he would. ^.~)
Keep up the good work,
Dorin
w00t! Wow, is that preview WAY into the future or what?
lol, Ryo wins! (of course, we all knew he would. ^.~)
Keep up the good work,
Dorin
12/30/2005 c17 Muchi Muchi Beth
I can't wait for the next chapter...It's killing me to know whats going to happen!
I can't wait for the next chapter...It's killing me to know whats going to happen!
12/30/2005 c17 GalevinFierre
I can't believe at first I didn't catch. omina...omino...Dominoyoyo...That other person is a girl...yeah...well much shorter than the other ones, but it was great nonetheless. So I take it Ryo'll be returning to Theif Town in the next chapter. I loved the concept of the two minds switching back and forth switching between styles without that other person knowing! Sounds like something I would write. Anyways great chapter again and I'll be waiting for the next one.
I can't believe at first I didn't catch. omina...omino...Dominoyoyo...That other person is a girl...yeah...well much shorter than the other ones, but it was great nonetheless. So I take it Ryo'll be returning to Theif Town in the next chapter. I loved the concept of the two minds switching back and forth switching between styles without that other person knowing! Sounds like something I would write. Anyways great chapter again and I'll be waiting for the next one.
12/30/2005 c2 Lyssess
I like it so far. He seems like a really realistic character, but i think you should have gone into his little hideout a little more. I can't wait to see what happens later on. I'd like it if you didn't swear so much, but hey! It's better than just about anything i could do! :)
I like it so far. He seems like a really realistic character, but i think you should have gone into his little hideout a little more. I can't wait to see what happens later on. I'd like it if you didn't swear so much, but hey! It's better than just about anything i could do! :)
12/30/2005 c16 GalevinFierre
Great Chapter, as always!Finally got to those fights (*Biff* *Bam* *Boom*) Can't wait to read the next one. Shadow-Melting...cool...cause for a while I just thought you called Ryo a shadow demon cause shadow sounded cool. I'm still wondering about the last fight.
Great Chapter, as always!Finally got to those fights (*Biff* *Bam* *Boom*) Can't wait to read the next one. Shadow-Melting...cool...cause for a while I just thought you called Ryo a shadow demon cause shadow sounded cool. I'm still wondering about the last fight.
12/25/2005 c16 Beth
TO Ryo
Wimp...Wimpy Wimpy...weakling...
Anyway Good reads yall can't wait for the rest ^^
TO Ryo
Wimp...Wimpy Wimpy...weakling...
Anyway Good reads yall can't wait for the rest ^^
12/25/2005 c15 Betheroonie
MUST READ MORE SO GOD...XD
MUST READ MORE SO GOD...XD