for I Hate John Kerry10/19/2006 c1 
78Ironic Presence
wow, John Kerry was responsible for all the problems in the world?
Not. lol
Oh, politics... what a tangled web...
78Ironic Presencewow, John Kerry was responsible for all the problems in the world?
Not. lol
Oh, politics... what a tangled web...
8/9/2006 c1 NO WAY
You just don't know when to quit, do you? I'm guessing you're the typical shit-head dumb-fuck republican... ingorant, stupid and completely christain. I hate to burst your little happy bubble but this is AMERICA. There are other people of other nationalities living in your own fucking neighborhood. Like me. I'M JEWISH. And guess what? I'm pro-choice (pro-abortions, stem-cell reaserch AND homosexual relationships even though I'm straight), anti-war, and (gasp) get this: I DON'T PRAY TO JESUS. WAKE UP HONEY. Bush is simple minded and only stands up for his own kind. Can I just point something out? Bush is Christain and bases most of his decisions on the bible (which is illegal... You know, separation of church and state...?) but YOUR BIBLE is about praising Jesus. AND JESUS WAS JEWISH. One day you'll have to realize that you're not alone and you're not superior to any one else. And neither is Bush. How about next election, we vote for someone who cares about the rest of the world and has a brain?
And people like you are the reason there's war. Don't use the word "hate." You don't even know what it means. Hate is Nazis... Dictators... Tyrants. You have the same ideals as the worst of them, yet you consider yourself the best.
There's a reason there are so few republicans on this website. It's because they are shit-heads like you who think they can write but CAN'T. They bash people who they DON'T EVEN KNOW and then think that they are "special." Your in the minority here on Fiction Press so if I were you, (and judging by the reivews you get on these pieces) I'd keep my mouth shut and focus on improving my writing AND my views.
You just don't know when to quit, do you? I'm guessing you're the typical shit-head dumb-fuck republican... ingorant, stupid and completely christain. I hate to burst your little happy bubble but this is AMERICA. There are other people of other nationalities living in your own fucking neighborhood. Like me. I'M JEWISH. And guess what? I'm pro-choice (pro-abortions, stem-cell reaserch AND homosexual relationships even though I'm straight), anti-war, and (gasp) get this: I DON'T PRAY TO JESUS. WAKE UP HONEY. Bush is simple minded and only stands up for his own kind. Can I just point something out? Bush is Christain and bases most of his decisions on the bible (which is illegal... You know, separation of church and state...?) but YOUR BIBLE is about praising Jesus. AND JESUS WAS JEWISH. One day you'll have to realize that you're not alone and you're not superior to any one else. And neither is Bush. How about next election, we vote for someone who cares about the rest of the world and has a brain?
And people like you are the reason there's war. Don't use the word "hate." You don't even know what it means. Hate is Nazis... Dictators... Tyrants. You have the same ideals as the worst of them, yet you consider yourself the best.
There's a reason there are so few republicans on this website. It's because they are shit-heads like you who think they can write but CAN'T. They bash people who they DON'T EVEN KNOW and then think that they are "special." Your in the minority here on Fiction Press so if I were you, (and judging by the reivews you get on these pieces) I'd keep my mouth shut and focus on improving my writing AND my views.
8/4/2005 c1 50Arael the 15th
OK, listen up, you square. I may be almost a year late to review this poem, but I didn't bother reading the poetry section until I started spilling out my own stuff for it.
First off, yes, Kerry was and still is an ass, but that's not the point. Your writing style is horribly weak to just simply say 'He's just such a stupid guy'. How long have you been writing in general? That very line along with the rest of this poem sounds like it was written by a middle schooler. Also, Kerry 'flip-flopped' because he wasn't too arrogant enough that he couldn't change his mind on issues. Would you rather have a leader that keeps to his views dispite the overwhelming evidence to prove him wrong? Apparently so, daddy-o. And last but not least, your infamous lines:
"If you're looking for some answers,For why the world's a mess.Why soldiers look like murderers,Blame John Kerry and the Press."
I see, so Kerry is your scape-goat for all the problems of the world, even the ones that may not necessarily have any relation to the guy? You, my so-called Catholic friend, are no different than the Jews that ordered Jesus to be crucified; you want someone to take the heat instead of you or your people realizing it's your fault to begin with. Ignorant and uncultured people like you disgust me to no end.
50Arael the 15thOK, listen up, you square. I may be almost a year late to review this poem, but I didn't bother reading the poetry section until I started spilling out my own stuff for it.
First off, yes, Kerry was and still is an ass, but that's not the point. Your writing style is horribly weak to just simply say 'He's just such a stupid guy'. How long have you been writing in general? That very line along with the rest of this poem sounds like it was written by a middle schooler. Also, Kerry 'flip-flopped' because he wasn't too arrogant enough that he couldn't change his mind on issues. Would you rather have a leader that keeps to his views dispite the overwhelming evidence to prove him wrong? Apparently so, daddy-o. And last but not least, your infamous lines:
"If you're looking for some answers,For why the world's a mess.Why soldiers look like murderers,Blame John Kerry and the Press."
I see, so Kerry is your scape-goat for all the problems of the world, even the ones that may not necessarily have any relation to the guy? You, my so-called Catholic friend, are no different than the Jews that ordered Jesus to be crucified; you want someone to take the heat instead of you or your people realizing it's your fault to begin with. Ignorant and uncultured people like you disgust me to no end.
5/27/2005 c1 3Isabelle Tied
HAHA! I LOVE THIS POEM! Its so true though! He disagrees and cannot even come up with a good fight against what he "hates" about Bush! _
3Isabelle TiedHAHA! I LOVE THIS POEM! Its so true though! He disagrees and cannot even come up with a good fight against what he "hates" about Bush! _
4/15/2005 c1 12HummerLover48
Kerry was really stupid. Who wants to look at that on the front page of the news paper everyday? He truly doesn't do what he thinks is right, he listens to those freakin' baby killers and gays.Lyss
12HummerLover48Kerry was really stupid. Who wants to look at that on the front page of the news paper everyday? He truly doesn't do what he thinks is right, he listens to those freakin' baby killers and gays.Lyss
4/9/2005 c1 17scratchfury
ok - a little late on the political argument in these reviews but president bush's economical decline started right arfter his 1st inaugeration *spell?* which means it was left after clinton - he doesn't have much for the 1st WEEK i think. Plus bush may sound slow - but he has good IDEAS - and answers the question in political debates. Kerry seems to have ONE good IDEA and flipflops on it in his speech and aalways goes to that idea durring questioning. Personally, I don't like either canidate and the parties need to get their act together. Plus - just because you are conservative/liberal or pro bush/kerry doesnt make you a republican/democrat
17scratchfuryok - a little late on the political argument in these reviews but president bush's economical decline started right arfter his 1st inaugeration *spell?* which means it was left after clinton - he doesn't have much for the 1st WEEK i think. Plus bush may sound slow - but he has good IDEAS - and answers the question in political debates. Kerry seems to have ONE good IDEA and flipflops on it in his speech and aalways goes to that idea durring questioning. Personally, I don't like either canidate and the parties need to get their act together. Plus - just because you are conservative/liberal or pro bush/kerry doesnt make you a republican/democrat
4/3/2005 c1 17TrueToMyself
*claps* I love the first four lines! This poem's very true in every sense. Only thing: even though the press is a big part of it, and it rhymes perfectly, by adding it you are ending with a topic that wasn't even mentioned anywhere else. If you edit this, I'd mention newspapers or reporters somewhere else...
ANYWAY, keep up the great work. This flows so well, and that is one of the most important factors of a poem. I never could write anything political...
Keep up the - Shoot, I'm out of adjectives.
Continue standing up for your opinions,
TTM
P.S. Thanks for mentioning me in your profile! =D Also, thanks for reading my profile. Most people think, "Oh, this is long, I'll ignore it."
17TrueToMyself*claps* I love the first four lines! This poem's very true in every sense. Only thing: even though the press is a big part of it, and it rhymes perfectly, by adding it you are ending with a topic that wasn't even mentioned anywhere else. If you edit this, I'd mention newspapers or reporters somewhere else...
ANYWAY, keep up the great work. This flows so well, and that is one of the most important factors of a poem. I never could write anything political...
Keep up the - Shoot, I'm out of adjectives.
Continue standing up for your opinions,
TTM
P.S. Thanks for mentioning me in your profile! =D Also, thanks for reading my profile. Most people think, "Oh, this is long, I'll ignore it."
3/8/2005 c1 6Toni Berthelette
I hate Kerry. I love Bush. I am republican and proud! Now, I don't agree with EVERYTHING Bush says, and I DO agree with some things that Kerry says, but Kerry flip-flops too much. That's why I wouldn't want him as president. A president should be able to make descions that he/she feels are right-not what is popular at the time.
~*Toni*~
6Toni BertheletteI hate Kerry. I love Bush. I am republican and proud! Now, I don't agree with EVERYTHING Bush says, and I DO agree with some things that Kerry says, but Kerry flip-flops too much. That's why I wouldn't want him as president. A president should be able to make descions that he/she feels are right-not what is popular at the time.
~*Toni*~
3/7/2005 c1 1ATHFgal
gumption, you are a loser! Kerry didn't cause the world to be a mess you idiot. Laast time I checked Bush was the President.
1ATHFgalgumption, you are a loser! Kerry didn't cause the world to be a mess you idiot. Laast time I checked Bush was the President.
3/7/2005 c1 3Felix Retif
Firstly - Kerry was a prat, agreed. Secondly - Kerry is not the reason the world's screwed up. That would have something to do with foolish, mindless, conformist conservatives who accept blindly whatever their leader tells them and unqeustioningly sing the virtues (real or imagined) of their nation. Kerry is not a fool. He may have closely resembled Frankenstein's creation, he may be counted on to swing with public oppinion - but hey, he's just imitating the vices of the majority of Americans (he does afterall only swing when they do). Think before you leap.
3Felix RetifFirstly - Kerry was a prat, agreed. Secondly - Kerry is not the reason the world's screwed up. That would have something to do with foolish, mindless, conformist conservatives who accept blindly whatever their leader tells them and unqeustioningly sing the virtues (real or imagined) of their nation. Kerry is not a fool. He may have closely resembled Frankenstein's creation, he may be counted on to swing with public oppinion - but hey, he's just imitating the vices of the majority of Americans (he does afterall only swing when they do). Think before you leap.
1/7/2005 c1 183Jo Madden
I AGREE! I hate John Kerry with a passion. Man if he became president, I would flee the country. Nothing says 'Merry Christmas America' like a terrorist attack, because within a month of the election, there would have been a terrorist attack. Please keep it up.
Hobbit of Doom
183Jo MaddenI AGREE! I hate John Kerry with a passion. Man if he became president, I would flee the country. Nothing says 'Merry Christmas America' like a terrorist attack, because within a month of the election, there would have been a terrorist attack. Please keep it up.
Hobbit of Doom
12/18/2004 c1 Writer
Wow. That was utter crap, and I am not just talking about the message it sends I am talking about your writing style. Terrible.
Wow. That was utter crap, and I am not just talking about the message it sends I am talking about your writing style. Terrible.
10/9/2004 c1 10C.Traub
"Blame John Kerry and the Press" You know that unless you watch the international news channels you dont see anywhere near the truth of what is going on. The media is owned by big buisness, Bush is the pocket of big buisness, add two and two together there going to take it easy on him or there going to make him look good. Especially Fox but wont go into that will take too long.
Oh, and your writing style sucks.
10C.Traub"Blame John Kerry and the Press" You know that unless you watch the international news channels you dont see anywhere near the truth of what is going on. The media is owned by big buisness, Bush is the pocket of big buisness, add two and two together there going to take it easy on him or there going to make him look good. Especially Fox but wont go into that will take too long.
Oh, and your writing style sucks.
10/3/2004 c1 alison
It cracks me up that you only like reviews from people who are "nice" to you. Regardless of your warped political views, this poem is pretty weak in all aspects.
It cracks me up that you only like reviews from people who are "nice" to you. Regardless of your warped political views, this poem is pretty weak in all aspects.
10/2/2004 c1 arrogantamerican
You tell me then, libyan, why is killing Saddam only okay when Saddam does it? And why is going to Iraq only for oil only when Bush approves it.
You tell me then, libyan, why is killing Saddam only okay when Saddam does it? And why is going to Iraq only for oil only when Bush approves it.