for Lost Soul11/19/2005 c1 rainynights
Oh...Wow...That was so sad and beautiful. The last few lines were the best: "And I shed a TearNone of them knew meYet I'm what they fear"
Your poem really got me there. Lovely job.
Oh...Wow...That was so sad and beautiful. The last few lines were the best: "And I shed a TearNone of them knew meYet I'm what they fear"
Your poem really got me there. Lovely job.
7/4/2005 c1 
13aquamoon222
A very heart-felt and painful poem to wright as well as to read, but I really like it. I'd also like to commend you on the subtle ryhming in this poem. Well done!
13aquamoon222A very heart-felt and painful poem to wright as well as to read, but I really like it. I'd also like to commend you on the subtle ryhming in this poem. Well done!
7/4/2005 c1 126Arm
wow great poem. long, but worth the read. it really was a powerful poem. i loved reading it. and thanks for the comment on my poem. its appreciated~*Arm*~
126Armwow great poem. long, but worth the read. it really was a powerful poem. i loved reading it. and thanks for the comment on my poem. its appreciated~*Arm*~
3/28/2005 c1 1JDWrites
...okay you scares me...of course then I scare myself, really you don't think Jason's the type to murder? Hmm, neither do I. And yes it is getting closer to where they meet, I've been getting questions from these other kids at my school about the location of our dear hero Jason. No, he does not live in Chicago, no he does not live in Ohio. He ends up in Ohio after being transferred from one prison to another after only about...a couple days, these days are not explained...unless I get some over whelming number of reviews that want them explained and I'll add them in with the deleted scenes after I finish the story. (YES! Deleted scenes! How wonderful am I?) I'm not telling you who the murderer is, I have a pretty good idea of who this murderer is, but I'm not quite sure yet, think back, WHO HAS A GRUDGE AGAINST HIM! And if you think you know it, you don't...well, maybe, but it's not as obvious as it seems. I LOVE to traumatize little boys and guess what? Now he thinks it's his fault...oh, angsty! But the real question is, what about NATALIE! What will she do? She's now, alone, pregnant...oh yes, and someone else asked me a question(my dad), he asked how Jason killed 29 women. The fact is, there are not 29 women there, I only list a couple but I plan on there being about...15 or 14, somewhere around there, and it's set in March, Ren's says it's set in August, but just ignore Ren's, I changed it at home, I was just too lazy to change it here. Okies, I got everything out of the way? I think? Um...OH! And Jason's not gay, not even remotely gay...and not a pedofile either...(sob) Well, I think that's all, did you at least LIKE my blood and gore? Do you notice the fiction ratings? Angel is rated "M"...I never noticed those...lol Hey, Broken Wings, even WITH my new blood, and gore is only "T", probably cause I say the "F" word a ton in Rens, well, we'll me hearing more in Jason's...cause cute and fluffy really DID just turn to nasty and suicidal! YAY! ^_^/. Oh well, I guess this review is long enough huh? So long, see you next chapter I guess, I might just update Angel, no reason to update Broken Wings, unless I get Angel updated before the weekend...
~Gaki Toki ^_-/
1JDWrites...okay you scares me...of course then I scare myself, really you don't think Jason's the type to murder? Hmm, neither do I. And yes it is getting closer to where they meet, I've been getting questions from these other kids at my school about the location of our dear hero Jason. No, he does not live in Chicago, no he does not live in Ohio. He ends up in Ohio after being transferred from one prison to another after only about...a couple days, these days are not explained...unless I get some over whelming number of reviews that want them explained and I'll add them in with the deleted scenes after I finish the story. (YES! Deleted scenes! How wonderful am I?) I'm not telling you who the murderer is, I have a pretty good idea of who this murderer is, but I'm not quite sure yet, think back, WHO HAS A GRUDGE AGAINST HIM! And if you think you know it, you don't...well, maybe, but it's not as obvious as it seems. I LOVE to traumatize little boys and guess what? Now he thinks it's his fault...oh, angsty! But the real question is, what about NATALIE! What will she do? She's now, alone, pregnant...oh yes, and someone else asked me a question(my dad), he asked how Jason killed 29 women. The fact is, there are not 29 women there, I only list a couple but I plan on there being about...15 or 14, somewhere around there, and it's set in March, Ren's says it's set in August, but just ignore Ren's, I changed it at home, I was just too lazy to change it here. Okies, I got everything out of the way? I think? Um...OH! And Jason's not gay, not even remotely gay...and not a pedofile either...(sob) Well, I think that's all, did you at least LIKE my blood and gore? Do you notice the fiction ratings? Angel is rated "M"...I never noticed those...lol Hey, Broken Wings, even WITH my new blood, and gore is only "T", probably cause I say the "F" word a ton in Rens, well, we'll me hearing more in Jason's...cause cute and fluffy really DID just turn to nasty and suicidal! YAY! ^_^/. Oh well, I guess this review is long enough huh? So long, see you next chapter I guess, I might just update Angel, no reason to update Broken Wings, unless I get Angel updated before the weekend...
~Gaki Toki ^_-/
3/17/2005 c1 3sheerWonder
good one! profound, although a little too long. post ur poems here! i wanna read them!
smiles, from a fellow poet, writer, girl.
3sheerWondergood one! profound, although a little too long. post ur poems here! i wanna read them!
smiles, from a fellow poet, writer, girl.
2/12/2005 c1 3DragonAtHeart
This is a really really pretty poem, alot of truth and meaning in it. Keep on writing! ^.^'
3DragonAtHeartThis is a really really pretty poem, alot of truth and meaning in it. Keep on writing! ^.^'
11/28/2004 c1 45Simple Enigma
wow, i love the last two lines, they really make the poem, good job! keep it up, i would love to see more in this gallery.
45Simple Enigmawow, i love the last two lines, they really make the poem, good job! keep it up, i would love to see more in this gallery.
10/22/2004 c1 Femaleking
Aw! That was sad! Yet it was brilliant! ^^ It's so true. My friends all ditched me because I have Depression and I felt like that for a bit. Like I'd died. *shudder* Nasty. This is really ace. Go you!
Aw! That was sad! Yet it was brilliant! ^^ It's so true. My friends all ditched me because I have Depression and I felt like that for a bit. Like I'd died. *shudder* Nasty. This is really ace. Go you!
10/11/2004 c1 CharmedCat17
I loved it, it is how i feel most of the time. It was very good.
I loved it, it is how i feel most of the time. It was very good.