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8/6/2005 c1 justasquirrel
i..wow..hm..shockingly moving.

6/8/2005 c1 10Moon-Child76
Still being wowed! This is gorgeous! The saddness and pain just pour from it. Once again...excellant form...(I know I'm reading these backwards, but you get it right?) Incredible William, really.~Chelle
2/10/2005 c1 81daphnegray78
Very tragic and well-written. Well done.


P.S. Oh and by the way, I just saw that saying at the end of your bio and I must say that I have yet to understand how "let's kill all the men and sodomize all the women," can be the same thing as cheers... but then again, that does sound like a good time if you're an Orc. ;)
11/15/2004 c1 Blank1379
(nods slowly)
Life can get pretty bad, can't it? You're completely right; nobody's perfect. Surprising how many people waste their time trying to be.
10/23/2004 c1 46inquistrix
nice idea, but this isn't ur best...bawls is too awkward for the intimate/sensual but ironicaly detatched mood that i think you are trying to create. work on the tenses too. other than that its pretty darn good. i apologize for not emailing you back you have no idea how much hw i have.
your girl
9/27/2004 c1 5Bleedingtree
this is just... gives me chills... it's great... in a creepy death way.. great william
9/27/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. awesome ending there

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