
12/3/2005 c1
14gillian-raine
ahh...this is definitely one of my favorite pieces... i am a big fantasy fiction fan and well in this day and age you rarely find good fantasy fiction (in my opinion or maybe i should just look harder...lol...) and "There's goblin's at the gate my Liege" really does stick to me hehehe, my favorite line, i'm just wondering why some lines seem to be cut but nontheless this one great narrative... great piece! good work...=P

ahh...this is definitely one of my favorite pieces... i am a big fantasy fiction fan and well in this day and age you rarely find good fantasy fiction (in my opinion or maybe i should just look harder...lol...) and "There's goblin's at the gate my Liege" really does stick to me hehehe, my favorite line, i'm just wondering why some lines seem to be cut but nontheless this one great narrative... great piece! good work...=P
7/17/2005 c1
148fergyness
this is really well thought out,
repetition does the poem good, and it deeply reminds me of lord of the rings
fast paceed and very clear - i liked it very much!

this is really well thought out,
repetition does the poem good, and it deeply reminds me of lord of the rings
fast paceed and very clear - i liked it very much!
7/16/2005 c1
5Wolf of Asguard
This is how you know you've hit the rock bottom of being bored, sending posting on the review section of your own work,lol...
Just me then..?

This is how you know you've hit the rock bottom of being bored, sending posting on the review section of your own work,lol...
Just me then..?
11/3/2004 c1
5rainbowsprinkles
hiya my darlin!
how be thee, my chick? great poem - get some bloody self esteem! Lol. I miss you, me, scarf boy and that stupid ex of mine in Sofia's. Lol.
X.

hiya my darlin!
how be thee, my chick? great poem - get some bloody self esteem! Lol. I miss you, me, scarf boy and that stupid ex of mine in Sofia's. Lol.
X.