Reviews: Maniac | FictionPress

1/7/2005 c1

13sunscraped
...Shoot a pregnant chick in the stomach? ok, it works. And I enjoy the picture you paint... with blood.~!

10/21/2004 c1 Melissa Lea Night
woah...swet...i like the line "break down the door/scare him shitless" very nice

10/1/2004 c1

28amaya dwyn
wow...that is... interesting. Very, you. I liked it. ;-) nice job

9/30/2004 c1

24Miyabi-chan
ok... u started with a guy, then ended wit a girl? right.
~Harumi