for The walls of innocence10/10/2005 c1 
9Morbid Maxwell
...someone who understands. People always say 'they only cut themselves for attention' but when they see me, they automatically change their opinion...I hate that. No, I don't do it for attention and if you don't know what's going on in my head...don't try to pretend. Good work!
Morbid Maxwell-Oh, you're a kinky little bastard.
9Morbid Maxwell...someone who understands. People always say 'they only cut themselves for attention' but when they see me, they automatically change their opinion...I hate that. No, I don't do it for attention and if you don't know what's going on in my head...don't try to pretend. Good work!
Morbid Maxwell-Oh, you're a kinky little bastard.
10/6/2005 c1 40R. Blade
exactly! no one truly knows what it's like unless they've been there. nothing can explain it like true empirical knowledge. attention.. pssht! usually, i find places that can be hidden easily. but at times, i go right for the gold and make it obvious.. :shrug: i guess i just feel like it sometimes. anyway, as always, your writings rock my socks!
~scars~
40R. Bladeexactly! no one truly knows what it's like unless they've been there. nothing can explain it like true empirical knowledge. attention.. pssht! usually, i find places that can be hidden easily. but at times, i go right for the gold and make it obvious.. :shrug: i guess i just feel like it sometimes. anyway, as always, your writings rock my socks!
~scars~
10/6/2005 c1 LadyAurelis
i used to cut... this is exactly the way you feel, like there is so much emotion that you can't control, so the control you have over physical pain feels, well, good. Even if you never cut, you really hit the nail on the head with this one. ExcellentFondly, Lady Aurelis
i used to cut... this is exactly the way you feel, like there is so much emotion that you can't control, so the control you have over physical pain feels, well, good. Even if you never cut, you really hit the nail on the head with this one. ExcellentFondly, Lady Aurelis
9/27/2005 c1 8Mr. Singh is back
"invisible demons"
clearly, clever choice of word usage and persuasive timing seem to be your strengths.
"Now all can see it."
Just one question. Why do you want everyone to see it?
8Mr. Singh is back"invisible demons"
clearly, clever choice of word usage and persuasive timing seem to be your strengths.
"Now all can see it."
Just one question. Why do you want everyone to see it?
8/26/2005 c1 7Chione Springs
That poem's deep, for years I've been trying to put what inside on a sheet of paper with no luck. I love it, keep up the awesome writing
7Chione SpringsThat poem's deep, for years I've been trying to put what inside on a sheet of paper with no luck. I love it, keep up the awesome writing
8/14/2005 c1 11The Legendary Eccentric
I can see the intent of the story. As I understand it, cutting is a way to give the emotional pain someone is experiencing a physical form so you can understand it, bind it up and maybe let it heal, unlike the emotional pain which doesn't subside no matter how hard you try to solve it.
A few of my friends cut and no matter how hard I try to talk to them, they shall continue. The struggle against letting your friends cut is almost as bad as fighting your own desires.
The second last line really ties everything together, gives a final meaning to it. Well done.
11The Legendary EccentricI can see the intent of the story. As I understand it, cutting is a way to give the emotional pain someone is experiencing a physical form so you can understand it, bind it up and maybe let it heal, unlike the emotional pain which doesn't subside no matter how hard you try to solve it.
A few of my friends cut and no matter how hard I try to talk to them, they shall continue. The struggle against letting your friends cut is almost as bad as fighting your own desires.
The second last line really ties everything together, gives a final meaning to it. Well done.
8/4/2005 c1 1Xiu
Dude I can so totally relate to this peom i use to be there and you were able to word it perfect and it really makes you think as well as picture the pain of the person and what must be going through their mind
thanx for your review i added more
1XiuDude I can so totally relate to this peom i use to be there and you were able to word it perfect and it really makes you think as well as picture the pain of the person and what must be going through their mind
thanx for your review i added more
7/8/2005 c1 47the seventh seal
So much angst. I don't necessarily agree with the theme; however, I do like the style. And even if we don't see eye-to-eye, I still enjoy that it sprung some new thought.
Thanks for the review you gave me, too.
47the seventh sealSo much angst. I don't necessarily agree with the theme; however, I do like the style. And even if we don't see eye-to-eye, I still enjoy that it sprung some new thought.
Thanks for the review you gave me, too.
7/7/2005 c1 purplePatterns
WOW SO TOTALLY AWESOME! you worded everything PERFECTLY! High five 10x 's dude, you are so the best!
WOW SO TOTALLY AWESOME! you worded everything PERFECTLY! High five 10x 's dude, you are so the best!
3/21/2005 c1 8stained innocence13
loved it... sum1 who understands.. well at least u seem 2. do u cut?
8stained innocence13loved it... sum1 who understands.. well at least u seem 2. do u cut?
11/30/2004 c1 141AllyCred
all i have to say is that this one of the best poems i have read, i especially love the very first line, coz i hate that people think we as cutters in general do it for attention or habit, coz i'm sure you can find other ways of getting attention. but anyway really good poem , i can relate to it alot.lots of love ~AllyCred~
141AllyCredall i have to say is that this one of the best poems i have read, i especially love the very first line, coz i hate that people think we as cutters in general do it for attention or habit, coz i'm sure you can find other ways of getting attention. but anyway really good poem , i can relate to it alot.lots of love ~AllyCred~
10/12/2004 c1 1Syrins
You seriously are wonderful at this. A beautifully written... poem/story/blah... anyways, Keep up the great work...
1SyrinsYou seriously are wonderful at this. A beautifully written... poem/story/blah... anyways, Keep up the great work...
10/3/2004 c1 7Syns
You captured the truth well. I'd clap and yell bravo, but that would mean I'd have to smile or something, so will 'Well done' work? Great...
7SynsYou captured the truth well. I'd clap and yell bravo, but that would mean I'd have to smile or something, so will 'Well done' work? Great...
10/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
Omg, you have voiced it perfectly, at least some of the many reasons and motivations for doing it, part of which probably elude even ourselves, our own consciousness. That image of breaking the walls/ breaking our skins is so fitting. "It makes sense, to streak the color red where it's visible" - I can so relate to the wish of making our pain visible by cutting. Great text, I wish more people would read this so they might understand better ...
127EirienOmg, you have voiced it perfectly, at least some of the many reasons and motivations for doing it, part of which probably elude even ourselves, our own consciousness. That image of breaking the walls/ breaking our skins is so fitting. "It makes sense, to streak the color red where it's visible" - I can so relate to the wish of making our pain visible by cutting. Great text, I wish more people would read this so they might understand better ...