6/18/2014 c3 Guest
Absolutely amazing. Please keep writing.
Absolutely amazing. Please keep writing.
12/20/2008 c3 4MacKitty
oh no...you actually wrote this in 2004...i guess i'll never see the end. how sad.
oh no...you actually wrote this in 2004...i guess i'll never see the end. how sad.
10/12/2008 c2 10Inkangel
Just one thing:
GET THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER!
It's amazing, and soo sweet. I love it ^_^
Just one thing:
GET THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER!
It's amazing, and soo sweet. I love it ^_^
6/27/2007 c2 xbloodxmagnoliax
hey i love your story its cute and kinda sad and yet strangely happy at the same time wow excuse my weirdness O.o anyway.. update soon ill be watching for it and keep up the good work
~magnolia
hey i love your story its cute and kinda sad and yet strangely happy at the same time wow excuse my weirdness O.o anyway.. update soon ill be watching for it and keep up the good work
~magnolia
10/8/2006 c3 1beloved18
im hooked on this story u sucked me into it and i want more of it now !lol j/k but i do want more story i luv it
im hooked on this story u sucked me into it and i want more of it now !lol j/k but i do want more story i luv it
11/14/2005 c3 thestinger
I love this story! It's killing me to know what happens; and I just finished the story less than a minute ago! Please finish the story quickly; but, as you should aslways do, make it to your liking.
~thestinger
I love this story! It's killing me to know what happens; and I just finished the story less than a minute ago! Please finish the story quickly; but, as you should aslways do, make it to your liking.
~thestinger
4/2/2005 c4 36Remnant Ages
I am SO confused! How the hell did that happen? How did Fue come back? Does that mean Kita's back too? God, you know how to kill someone on an ending... So much so that I'm going to do something that I've never done and, truth be told, despise. I'm actually going to ask for a sequal. That in itself should show you how great your story is and how much you managed to frustrate me. So, to be the annoying little fan, please, please, PLEASE (with sugar and chocolate and cherries and cake and icecream and... a new car!) write a sequal before I go into a random chocolate spree, go broke from it, and gain a hundred pounds from the stress and confusion and... stuff. So, um... Please?
I am SO confused! How the hell did that happen? How did Fue come back? Does that mean Kita's back too? God, you know how to kill someone on an ending... So much so that I'm going to do something that I've never done and, truth be told, despise. I'm actually going to ask for a sequal. That in itself should show you how great your story is and how much you managed to frustrate me. So, to be the annoying little fan, please, please, PLEASE (with sugar and chocolate and cherries and cake and icecream and... a new car!) write a sequal before I go into a random chocolate spree, go broke from it, and gain a hundred pounds from the stress and confusion and... stuff. So, um... Please?
1/11/2005 c4 SatisfyAnEmptyInside
I read this chapter, but I was being lazy and didn't review. Forgive me? I loved this story. And I liked the end.
I read this chapter, but I was being lazy and didn't review. Forgive me? I loved this story. And I liked the end.
1/11/2005 c4 1Shades Of Hades
Hey, hey! It's finally letting me review! Yay! Anyways, yes, I have walked out of here sane... er... I think! I did start hearing strange paper crinkling noises that apparently no one else hears, but other then that, compleletly sane! ^.^ Anyways, I adore this storie! I'm forcing my friend Rachie to read it!
Hey, hey! It's finally letting me review! Yay! Anyways, yes, I have walked out of here sane... er... I think! I did start hearing strange paper crinkling noises that apparently no one else hears, but other then that, compleletly sane! ^.^ Anyways, I adore this storie! I'm forcing my friend Rachie to read it!
1/4/2005 c4 13Kittentits
lol..this chapter totaly feels like you just got tired of it and so finished it in the quickest but neates way..which by your authorsnote, you did.. coughlazycough...just playing. maybe..it was still good..i liked the whole thing at the end about them always being together no mater what time or place. it was sweet...its sad that Sarah died..:-(..but i'm glad the wierd shadow creature thing is gone..yippie...anyway..wonderful job with the whole story. I'll check out your other story sooner or latter.
lol..this chapter totaly feels like you just got tired of it and so finished it in the quickest but neates way..which by your authorsnote, you did.. coughlazycough...just playing. maybe..it was still good..i liked the whole thing at the end about them always being together no mater what time or place. it was sweet...its sad that Sarah died..:-(..but i'm glad the wierd shadow creature thing is gone..yippie...anyway..wonderful job with the whole story. I'll check out your other story sooner or latter.
12/20/2004 c3 teenscreamqueen
Wow! I have been reading this all day and I just love it. You're doing a fantastic job so far darling, don't stop now.
Wow! I have been reading this all day and I just love it. You're doing a fantastic job so far darling, don't stop now.
12/19/2004 c3 6bookworm0706
This is amazing! I love it! It's definitely going on my favorites list. I would like to see a little more of Fue though...please?
Amazing work...
Wormy
This is amazing! I love it! It's definitely going on my favorites list. I would like to see a little more of Fue though...please?
Amazing work...
Wormy
11/12/2004 c3 2Ree
I'm a little confused, but very, very intrigued. I loved this chapter, because Kito is becoming a much stronger person, and Fue is just adorable. I'm also starting to sense some evil vibes, and I'm developing some suspicions ... but I'll keep my mouth shut. I wouldn't want to look like an idiot if I'm completely wrong, heh. I wish Niki, Sara and Hirami could be as happy as Kito and Fue. I can't wait 'til next chapter! :3
I'm a little confused, but very, very intrigued. I loved this chapter, because Kito is becoming a much stronger person, and Fue is just adorable. I'm also starting to sense some evil vibes, and I'm developing some suspicions ... but I'll keep my mouth shut. I wouldn't want to look like an idiot if I'm completely wrong, heh. I wish Niki, Sara and Hirami could be as happy as Kito and Fue. I can't wait 'til next chapter! :3