for That Lovely Green Room2/5/2006 c1 
9Boshemia
Nicely done! It's a true tapestry of words, where each word is a part of the whole fabric of the story. Some people choose to use simple designs and others venture into the realm of artwork. You are an artist...
9BoshemiaNicely done! It's a true tapestry of words, where each word is a part of the whole fabric of the story. Some people choose to use simple designs and others venture into the realm of artwork. You are an artist...
10/16/2005 c1 63elasticbobaturtle
Love and obsession, the line's very thin indeed. Nice portrayal; a little scary but good, still.
63elasticbobaturtleLove and obsession, the line's very thin indeed. Nice portrayal; a little scary but good, still.
3/14/2005 c1 Reuben p
hee. Nice stuff. I always say nice stuff don't i. That's cos your work is so that good...it IS nice stuff! hahax ;p
hee. Nice stuff. I always say nice stuff don't i. That's cos your work is so that good...it IS nice stuff! hahax ;p
12/14/2004 c1 18Nonah
That's...more than a little angsty! It's very good though, and it captures your attantion. It's a bit disturbing though.
18NonahThat's...more than a little angsty! It's very good though, and it captures your attantion. It's a bit disturbing though.
12/5/2004 c1 missingmuse
A hauntingly beautiful story. I like the perspective you wrote it from!
A hauntingly beautiful story. I like the perspective you wrote it from!
11/17/2004 c1 captain r3tardo
wow
this was an awesome story despite its unnerving end...
i liked it! :]
wow
this was an awesome story despite its unnerving end...
i liked it! :]
11/9/2004 c1 Aaron G Saunders
I found a link to this on LJ.
Pretty dry, as there aren't really characters or anything that makes the story unique, but it's interesting and poetic.
I found a link to this on LJ.
Pretty dry, as there aren't really characters or anything that makes the story unique, but it's interesting and poetic.
10/26/2004 c1 14Kitty-brdg
that was great! this was very different, but very good. Of course the intensity of it was made worse by me listening to Eminem's song 'kim'.
You are a really great writer. poetry and all. Have to go read poems now.
Have a nice day
14Kitty-brdgthat was great! this was very different, but very good. Of course the intensity of it was made worse by me listening to Eminem's song 'kim'.
You are a really great writer. poetry and all. Have to go read poems now.
Have a nice day
10/2/2004 c1 47The Postmodern Prometheus
wow, this was awesome! i loved the way you built up the suspense and then the ending was shocking, really well written. reminds me of Charlotte Perkins Gilman's "The Yellow Wallpaper," you've written a great story here :)
47The Postmodern Prometheuswow, this was awesome! i loved the way you built up the suspense and then the ending was shocking, really well written. reminds me of Charlotte Perkins Gilman's "The Yellow Wallpaper," you've written a great story here :)
10/1/2004 c1 egwshrgfdf
Holy jeez, that's...incredible. Always loving short stories, this one just seems so...indescribably good? Heh, but honestly; great work! Insanity is a beautiful canvas. ^_^ *is inspired*
Holy jeez, that's...incredible. Always loving short stories, this one just seems so...indescribably good? Heh, but honestly; great work! Insanity is a beautiful canvas. ^_^ *is inspired*
10/1/2004 c1 61tripletxtreme
Wow that was lovely. Disturbing too, but you made it seem so real. A scaring and chilling look into insanity.I really, really enjoyed that. I kpet me on my toes. I like this.
61tripletxtremeWow that was lovely. Disturbing too, but you made it seem so real. A scaring and chilling look into insanity.I really, really enjoyed that. I kpet me on my toes. I like this.