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1/6/2005 c1 jimmy
hey.. like the haiku, relli descriptive yer.. derno how u manage to write dat good stuff.. keep it up yer
10/6/2004 c1 5kazfuego
Your haiku totally rocks my socks! I love the way you manipulate the words to capture life so beautifully. *tear* The best I've read so far! lol
luv ya!
-kaz
10/1/2004 c1 MansonAAN
dis one is really gud once agen try jap?
10/1/2004 c1 43Toph Gonzalez
The color blending imagery is awesome. Keep writing...
9/30/2004 c1 3naivete chica
This is my favourite out of the three! ^^ It conveys autumn perfectly! I would neva b able to write poety as wel as you. Whenever I try to write poety, I end up discusted at myself. =( Are you going to continue this and make it longer? Cus I'll be waiting to read more of you great poetry!
~Luv Alice
9/30/2004 c1 72Ruby Woo
i can really imagine this

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