for The Hopeless Romantic Trilogy Part III: Poem9/30/2005 c1 
6Renzie
Nice. This flows really well :D Great job! You're quite good at writing these! My favorite out of the trilogy was the first part, but the other two were also great. Wonderful job! 3
6RenzieNice. This flows really well :D Great job! You're quite good at writing these! My favorite out of the trilogy was the first part, but the other two were also great. Wonderful job! 3
2/6/2005 c1 27HgBookworm
Great poem. There's really some feeling in this poem. You can feel the rejection and disbelief radiating off of your work. -HgBookworm
27HgBookwormGreat poem. There's really some feeling in this poem. You can feel the rejection and disbelief radiating off of your work. -HgBookworm
11/9/2004 c1 1rukki
oh. i am guessing it didn't go too well. your trilogy sounds autobiographical. There is a right time for everything. Don't lose faith in love or romance, it might come unexpectedly. Your poem actually rhymes. I haven't been reading poems that do rhyme. I love the parts where you say "A ticket in her hand,/ A ring on her finger." Everything seems to be up to her to decide where she wants to go in the relationship. Also "It all started with/'what's your favorite song?'" It hits home more because it is realistic. People do start conversations with that. I really enjoyed reading your trilogy.
1rukkioh. i am guessing it didn't go too well. your trilogy sounds autobiographical. There is a right time for everything. Don't lose faith in love or romance, it might come unexpectedly. Your poem actually rhymes. I haven't been reading poems that do rhyme. I love the parts where you say "A ticket in her hand,/ A ring on her finger." Everything seems to be up to her to decide where she wants to go in the relationship. Also "It all started with/'what's your favorite song?'" It hits home more because it is realistic. People do start conversations with that. I really enjoyed reading your trilogy.