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10/17/2005 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
nice! just what i needed for a little bit of inspiration ::hugs:: this was really good and heart felt. i know how it feels... when some one so close to you does that. you know you're doing the wrong thing by sticking with them, but you can't help it. sad huh? well, let's just say, you did an awesome job with this. hehe my cousin's name is maha =) (yes, i'm random. there's nothing wrong with that lol) adios muchachos,

3/30/2005 c1 2jadedmuse
Beautiful. I feel like sticking all men in a hole and nuking them. Your poem gave me further inspiration!I hope you're not really stuk in a situation like this. But if you are, here's some advice from a retired dater- if you think he's lying about anything, 90% of the time, he really is.LOL- great Poem!
3/20/2005 c1 2BKGal-24
Okay, now you're making me cry again. First with that UNBELIEVABLE review you left me which i totally didn't deserve! and now this poem...wow. Again, you rock sista!
3/17/2005 c1 11Tigress015
Men! I can sympathasize with you there. It's a great poem. Write more, you're good at it!
2/13/2005 c1 5Eagle Seance
Why do I melt at his sincerity when he says, "I'm sorry?"

Yet why does this voice whisper to me that he's not?

i liked these two lines especially. great work.
2/11/2005 c1 Le amant
Well this may not be a review but its just something related to this poem. Well its not that someone tried to hurt u. Hurting u is like hurting his own self..and when something bad happens and he says sorry than he truly means it...and he never doubted u way and wonder y u think so.. & ya...u know wat...
1/7/2005 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
I relate to this. Its so hard to hate someone you like. No matter how nasty they are, we always go back. Shrug. Sad? Maybe. Well wrote? Definately.
1/6/2005 c1 J.E.Wyatt
hi its me~!i like this one alot~!write some more~!just wanted to tell you... it may take some days before i can update agian T.T my computer got virused up lol so we have to get it fixed..it 'll take just a few days lol... hehehe
12/12/2004 c1 Cara Sterling
That's deep, gotta love all thse insecure questions that float through everyones minds when they think they love someone... Great write, I can't write poems for the life of me, I have one that I think is good, that everyone tells me is like Edgar Allan Poe but whatever, haha... wow, great poem... makes me a litle jealous haha...~*Jaden Anderson*~
12/5/2004 c1 Magic Marshmallow
Aw, I love this poem! It's so beautiful and I think a lot of people can relate to what you're saying.
11/20/2004 c1 6Lisa0211
So true. These questions semi-apply to life. Friends that treat you badly and yet, don't realize it and they act nicely and you feel like nothing ever went wrong, but something tells you that ain't true. Very insightful poem. Too bad we know this stuff and we still get hurt anyway. Nice poem I could actually read it and I'm usually not a poem person. gj! ~Lisa~
10/1/2004 c1 4pandagirl11
AH I CAN REVIEW! lol fictionpress has been down for so long -.-" thanks for the review! and very good job on your poem. =D
9/30/2004 c1 4eLm0
HI Baji! ^_^ I love this poem! Its so deep...I mean, it touches all the points, and it even brings a tear to my eyes! What I mean to say is that its really good...you really put some thought into this, I know...and don't worry. Things will look up! ^_^

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