for Shifting the Blame7/10/2006 c2 
4Seashah
That is NOT even fair. Cliffhanger... It's really good though. I remember reading the first part a long time ago, like two years. It's continuing really smoothly, and it's so good. Like all your work. Hope to see the third part soon!
4SeashahThat is NOT even fair. Cliffhanger... It's really good though. I remember reading the first part a long time ago, like two years. It's continuing really smoothly, and it's so good. Like all your work. Hope to see the third part soon!
6/3/2005 c2 17Cattails
Ah, no! Cliffhanger! I love how the story's going. It's a lot of fun to read. Can't wait for next chapter!
~*.Cat
17CattailsAh, no! Cliffhanger! I love how the story's going. It's a lot of fun to read. Can't wait for next chapter!
~*.Cat
6/3/2005 c1 Cattails
This is a fun story! I like how it's moving, and how the characters act. Off I go to read the next chapter!
~*.Cat
This is a fun story! I like how it's moving, and how the characters act. Off I go to read the next chapter!
~*.Cat
5/21/2005 c2 7Rhapsody's Song
I really like this storyit's a shame that you're not making it into an epicLooking forward to reading the next chapter!
7Rhapsody's SongI really like this storyit's a shame that you're not making it into an epicLooking forward to reading the next chapter!
5/20/2005 c2 3Itadakimasu-chan
YAY! I can't wait for you to finish it up! Good job. Continue soon, ne?
- Itada.
3Itadakimasu-chanYAY! I can't wait for you to finish it up! Good job. Continue soon, ne?
- Itada.
1/30/2005 c1 11Wolfie Star26
hey i was reading your profile, umm i went from silver wolf gurl, to silver gang girl, and now im at wolfie star 26.
hehe, anyway, this fic is awesome, and i can tell you like using Rapier in most of your stories. That and the change in eye color and hair color. update it soon.
11Wolfie Star26hey i was reading your profile, umm i went from silver wolf gurl, to silver gang girl, and now im at wolfie star 26.
hehe, anyway, this fic is awesome, and i can tell you like using Rapier in most of your stories. That and the change in eye color and hair color. update it soon.
10/1/2004 c1 6KittyCaesar
Hm...*thinking thinking* nice plotline. I like the direction this story is heading in and I can see a light at the end of the tunnel and it seems very bright^_^! I want to say that you developed the characters very nicly but I would need the second part of the story to actually say that wouldn't I? Ah, what the heck! From what I can tell you developed the whole plotline very well, not just the characters^-^! Well, can't wait for the second part to come out! I'll be waiting in the shadows to stalk you're every move until you update, so you better do it quickly because I'm already getting ready to hide behind that trash can over there! *creeps over to trash can and ducks behind it* You cant see me! *smiles* UPDATE!
-Starshipchaser aka SSC
6KittyCaesarHm...*thinking thinking* nice plotline. I like the direction this story is heading in and I can see a light at the end of the tunnel and it seems very bright^_^! I want to say that you developed the characters very nicly but I would need the second part of the story to actually say that wouldn't I? Ah, what the heck! From what I can tell you developed the whole plotline very well, not just the characters^-^! Well, can't wait for the second part to come out! I'll be waiting in the shadows to stalk you're every move until you update, so you better do it quickly because I'm already getting ready to hide behind that trash can over there! *creeps over to trash can and ducks behind it* You cant see me! *smiles* UPDATE!
-Starshipchaser aka SSC
10/1/2004 c1 Xerro
LONG! So very long, it took me an hour to read. And cos i have an attention span that lasts five seconds i didn't get through it at a very quick pace.
So your parents took away your PC. That's harsh. But be thankful, i blew my PC up yesterday. I was only trying to fix the internet! lol. My dad says he maybe able to salvage the files. And since i have all the notes to all my stories along with the first two rewritten chapters to Demonica, as well as the end two chapters to Soul Catcher, i'll be annoyed if i lose them. My dad is actually making sure i don't blow up this pc as well. heh. I blew up his last three, and since that was my first pc, my total number of pc's destroyed goes up to 4. Me and PC's really don't get on. Stuff the millenium bug, and all these viruses. COMPUTERS WATCH OUT FOR XERRO! COMPUTER DESTROYER EXTRODINAIRE!
Anyway i'm sure this is meant to be a review so here goes. The stories good. The plot hasn't fully revealed itself in this chapter, but i have a general idea, though i think i'm gonna have to reread it just to take it all in.
The best thing about it is your characters, the emotions you make them go through you bring across to the readers amazingly well. I think in your writing that is what you're best at. Everyone who reads your stories can get a good feel for the characters, and because of that they can take what happens to them more to heart, as it makes the characters seem more real.
I also see Rapier is in this one. Do you have a particular fondness for this name or sword or something?
Usually i don't bother pointing out spelling mistakes but i just found this funny. "I can have their heads on steaks here by the end of 24 hours-" I'm pretty sure you meant stakes unless your serving heads as a side order for dinner.
A long review to match a long story that's what this is turning out to be. Update this story, if you've written a part two then there's no point in letting it stay in your pc never to see the light of day. I'm sure there are reviewers like me who are eager to find out what happens. Besides do you have any idea how annoyed i'll be if you tell me that i just read your story with my own freewill only to find you haven't updated. Take a guess as to how annoyed i'll be.
Right i think i'll be going now cos i'm playing in a football tournament tomorrow and i don't want to be half asleep during the matches. But i do have one last question. Has Charon said anything about the story recently? Cos i sent him an email asking him, and have yet to have had a reply.
Laterz and update soon! Like tomorrow soon!
Xerro
P.S: You said you liked Jet Set Radio Future. Well just so i can gloat to someone, cos you're the only other person i know who thought it was good. I completed it. Yep all of it. Got all 140 graffiti souls, did every trick, found every tape, sprayed all the graffiti spots, and unlocked every character. I completed it so yay for me. Only took me over 30hrs... not too long... was it?
LONG! So very long, it took me an hour to read. And cos i have an attention span that lasts five seconds i didn't get through it at a very quick pace.
So your parents took away your PC. That's harsh. But be thankful, i blew my PC up yesterday. I was only trying to fix the internet! lol. My dad says he maybe able to salvage the files. And since i have all the notes to all my stories along with the first two rewritten chapters to Demonica, as well as the end two chapters to Soul Catcher, i'll be annoyed if i lose them. My dad is actually making sure i don't blow up this pc as well. heh. I blew up his last three, and since that was my first pc, my total number of pc's destroyed goes up to 4. Me and PC's really don't get on. Stuff the millenium bug, and all these viruses. COMPUTERS WATCH OUT FOR XERRO! COMPUTER DESTROYER EXTRODINAIRE!
Anyway i'm sure this is meant to be a review so here goes. The stories good. The plot hasn't fully revealed itself in this chapter, but i have a general idea, though i think i'm gonna have to reread it just to take it all in.
The best thing about it is your characters, the emotions you make them go through you bring across to the readers amazingly well. I think in your writing that is what you're best at. Everyone who reads your stories can get a good feel for the characters, and because of that they can take what happens to them more to heart, as it makes the characters seem more real.
I also see Rapier is in this one. Do you have a particular fondness for this name or sword or something?
Usually i don't bother pointing out spelling mistakes but i just found this funny. "I can have their heads on steaks here by the end of 24 hours-" I'm pretty sure you meant stakes unless your serving heads as a side order for dinner.
A long review to match a long story that's what this is turning out to be. Update this story, if you've written a part two then there's no point in letting it stay in your pc never to see the light of day. I'm sure there are reviewers like me who are eager to find out what happens. Besides do you have any idea how annoyed i'll be if you tell me that i just read your story with my own freewill only to find you haven't updated. Take a guess as to how annoyed i'll be.
Right i think i'll be going now cos i'm playing in a football tournament tomorrow and i don't want to be half asleep during the matches. But i do have one last question. Has Charon said anything about the story recently? Cos i sent him an email asking him, and have yet to have had a reply.
Laterz and update soon! Like tomorrow soon!
Xerro
P.S: You said you liked Jet Set Radio Future. Well just so i can gloat to someone, cos you're the only other person i know who thought it was good. I completed it. Yep all of it. Got all 140 graffiti souls, did every trick, found every tape, sprayed all the graffiti spots, and unlocked every character. I completed it so yay for me. Only took me over 30hrs... not too long... was it?