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9Morbid Maxwell
Wow, much emotion in such little time...I love that about your works! ...oh, too many to like...
Morbid Maxwell-Oh, you're a kinky little bastard.
9Morbid MaxwellWow, much emotion in such little time...I love that about your works! ...oh, too many to like...
Morbid Maxwell-Oh, you're a kinky little bastard.
9/27/2005 c1 8Mr. Singh is back
Great poem. I have no arguement for your point this time, and the truly talented say much by applying few words.
8Mr. Singh is backGreat poem. I have no arguement for your point this time, and the truly talented say much by applying few words.
2/12/2005 c1 Out-Of-Reality
Interesting, a short poem but it said enough to get amessage accross. I liked it of course!
Interesting, a short poem but it said enough to get amessage accross. I liked it of course!
11/26/2004 c1 13through these jaded eyes
i got to agree with "red tear drops" on this poem. poems can be seen in different ways, and as an author, i would've thought that you would want to know what other poeple's thoughts towards your poems. but back to the more positive side, this is a short yet very good poem and hidden message was pretty good too.
13through these jaded eyesi got to agree with "red tear drops" on this poem. poems can be seen in different ways, and as an author, i would've thought that you would want to know what other poeple's thoughts towards your poems. but back to the more positive side, this is a short yet very good poem and hidden message was pretty good too.
10/3/2004 c1 7Syns
I'm not an idiot, and yeah, I got it. There are a lot of ways to take that poem, but judging by your other works I believe I got the right one down. I wouldn't suggest calling others an idiot if they didn't get the poem as you meant it to be taken as. People see poems in different ways, it might be something special to them in their minds though to you it means smething totally different. Poems are words of expression, and everyone sees them their own way. Whatever, your life, your works. Again with the 'Well done'...
7SynsI'm not an idiot, and yeah, I got it. There are a lot of ways to take that poem, but judging by your other works I believe I got the right one down. I wouldn't suggest calling others an idiot if they didn't get the poem as you meant it to be taken as. People see poems in different ways, it might be something special to them in their minds though to you it means smething totally different. Poems are words of expression, and everyone sees them their own way. Whatever, your life, your works. Again with the 'Well done'...
10/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
So true. The physical pain (if felt in the first place) may subside, but the emotional pain that was meant to be soothed and made visible by the cutting cannot be mended that easily ... Your poem brings out that contrast really well, the short, concise form makes it even more powerful.
127EirienSo true. The physical pain (if felt in the first place) may subside, but the emotional pain that was meant to be soothed and made visible by the cutting cannot be mended that easily ... Your poem brings out that contrast really well, the short, concise form makes it even more powerful.