for Blade10/10/2005 c1 
9Morbid Maxwell
This has become my favorite. It's very true. I was having an argument with someone over something like this the other day actually. They were mad because I'm different...so I asked, "What's so wrong with being different? I'm still human..." and that was it. Ah, great job! Fantastic!
9Morbid MaxwellThis has become my favorite. It's very true. I was having an argument with someone over something like this the other day actually. They were mad because I'm different...so I asked, "What's so wrong with being different? I'm still human..." and that was it. Ah, great job! Fantastic!
9/27/2005 c1 8Mr. Singh is back
"Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but words cannot hurt me."
Well, this phrase all depends on whether you allow them to hurt or not. There was a time when words hurt me too, but they don't anymore, because I realized that they only hurt because I allowed them to.
But as usual, you have written a good piece, and as usual, it could use a rhyme scheme, and as usual, your use of irony is amazing. Keep writing.
8Mr. Singh is back"Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but words cannot hurt me."
Well, this phrase all depends on whether you allow them to hurt or not. There was a time when words hurt me too, but they don't anymore, because I realized that they only hurt because I allowed them to.
But as usual, you have written a good piece, and as usual, it could use a rhyme scheme, and as usual, your use of irony is amazing. Keep writing.
11/30/2004 c1 141AllyCred
that was great, i loved the flow and the content was beautiful. i can relate alot to this, your a very talented writer. lots of love ~AllyCred
141AllyCredthat was great, i loved the flow and the content was beautiful. i can relate alot to this, your a very talented writer. lots of love ~AllyCred
11/30/2004 c1 lunasilverstar
as everyone else has said, great job. the way that you place the words on the page and how you can get across the fact that although people may say that we are crazy, they in fact are the ones who have me made me this way.
~leila*
as everyone else has said, great job. the way that you place the words on the page and how you can get across the fact that although people may say that we are crazy, they in fact are the ones who have me made me this way.
~leila*
11/26/2004 c1 13through these jaded eyes
i love your view on these issues and how you voice them. it's so incredible that you can write these things, but i got to ask, how can you know so well these emotions that cutters have?
13through these jaded eyesi love your view on these issues and how you voice them. it's so incredible that you can write these things, but i got to ask, how can you know so well these emotions that cutters have?
10/7/2004 c1 1Syrins
You really know what you're saying... makes me wonder... you're very wonderful with the words of poetry
1SyrinsYou really know what you're saying... makes me wonder... you're very wonderful with the words of poetry
10/4/2004 c1 7Syns
Another well done poem. I really liked the flow in this one, and the ending, your way with the words. Yay, I'm being positve, shoot me... But really, I enjoy your stuff and can't wait to see some more... you really get the thoughts of someone who cuts or has a misunderstood mind. I'm gonna have this friend of mine, Syrins, review your stuff. She'd love you. So when you get a review from her... yaya. Later.
7SynsAnother well done poem. I really liked the flow in this one, and the ending, your way with the words. Yay, I'm being positve, shoot me... But really, I enjoy your stuff and can't wait to see some more... you really get the thoughts of someone who cuts or has a misunderstood mind. I'm gonna have this friend of mine, Syrins, review your stuff. She'd love you. So when you get a review from her... yaya. Later.
10/2/2004 c1 selene909
Breathing now drowning
You see me but I'm not really there
You think I'm happy but my eyes bleed tears
you have a way with words that i could only dream of aquiring. i've read all of your pieces i like the way you slip in words and sentences that shouldnt belong and yet they do. i feel the emotion before and after read them. you very depresing very truthful and very inspiring. i dont know you or if what you write is true. but i hope your safe. you have a gift.
later dayz
...sleep, those little slices of death...how I loathe them..."
Breathing now drowning
You see me but I'm not really there
You think I'm happy but my eyes bleed tears
you have a way with words that i could only dream of aquiring. i've read all of your pieces i like the way you slip in words and sentences that shouldnt belong and yet they do. i feel the emotion before and after read them. you very depresing very truthful and very inspiring. i dont know you or if what you write is true. but i hope your safe. you have a gift.
later dayz
...sleep, those little slices of death...how I loathe them..."
10/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
Again well done, again I can relate. You really get across the truth that human words and actions can hurt so much more than the fake solace and release of the blade, that they (insensitive people) might actually be the cause why it is sought. And then they consider us crazy, because they do not understand. You bring out that contrast really well.
127EirienAgain well done, again I can relate. You really get across the truth that human words and actions can hurt so much more than the fake solace and release of the blade, that they (insensitive people) might actually be the cause why it is sought. And then they consider us crazy, because they do not understand. You bring out that contrast really well.