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4/22/2006 c1 6Song of the Hawk
aw... I always wondered why he never cried. x)
1/2/2006 c1 31Ky-Ky Apocalypse
*bursts into tears* I want my poor neglected teady back!... okay, calm yourself Kyomi, calm yourself... I really loved your poem *sniff*
8/17/2005 c1 21Whitedragon354
Teddy Bears! Oh how i have been looking for a good poem that is about something other than love or death, like many of my pieces seem to be! GOOD JOB! you get a high five

~WD
4/11/2005 c1 21lordelfy
aw y would i flmae u?it was a really good poem
1/17/2005 c1 30really
pretty, your imagery has potential! expand your repertoire (ooh big word but i think i spelt it wrong) of poems! yes. i think this is really simple and plain and not really dressy like some of the other poems you see on FP and it's a refreshing change. (: keep it up!
10/2/2004 c1 31Ohmm
oh you're samuel's friend rite.
bahaha i like this.
it's nice how you utilise normal everyday items and personify them to give way to deeper meaning.
beautiful-!
10/2/2004 c1 169wantedINheaven
I wouldn't flame you! That was really good. I didn't think it was 'just plain weird'. And even if it was, weird poems are awesome.
This was really good, and I like the metaphors that I can see here, intended or not. *adds to faves*
10/2/2004 c1 72Ruby Woo
Even the tattered, torn and downtrodden have their aspirations. You make the ordinary sound extraordinary.
10/2/2004 c1 oopsie daisy
im on a mission: to comment on everything i read! haha. (:
tribute to teddies! yeah! love the poem (i love teddies, yayy) but WHY DOES THE TEDDY FEEL NEGLECTED? ): i feel sad for the teddy. rahh.
love the line "that listen when you think/there's nothing to hear"
(: totally encompasses the teddy quality.
well, loveyou (you know that, yayy)
write on!

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