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2/27/2005 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
It amazes me time after time how much emotion can be fit into 3 sentences. Nice Work.
2/10/2005 c1 2jarvis100
Very short! A little to short for me. But it was good for what it was. I'll give it a 7.2 out of 10.
1/19/2005 c1 1JD Kennedy
I'm not one to read haiku's, because in my opinion it seems all too easy, but this is so basic (not in a bad way) that it's completely understandable. ~ JD
1/14/2005 c1 94smile persephone
So sweet, so vivid. Lovely.
1/11/2005 c1 12CommanderKilljoy
nice. I like it
12/31/2004 c1 hellokittychic31
so very sweet...good job, i enjoy reading ur haikus...:)
12/30/2004 c1 Ivriniel
Wow, beautiful, you captured this feeling very nicely.
12/19/2004 c1 3MissLeigh021
Wow, thats beautiful. I love it.
11/7/2004 c1 Infamous Writer
Fictionpress hasn't been letting me review your haiku, so here it FINALLY is. This has a lot of nice detail and visual, if you get what I'm saying. Your way with haiku is fascinating; it's almost like it comes to you naturally. Awesome job here.
10/21/2004 c1 58Sage Valkisco
I'm not a haiku person...seems to easy of a talent...but I love just with in three lines you had so much emotion...the words...good job...now to read more..
10/20/2004 c1 2philoslove
Sweet and so powerful! I liked the surging of emotions part! It portrayed the passion pretty well!
10/17/2004 c1 David Stephen
Wow I LOVE this! It is so vivid and amazing! Keep up this excellent work! ~David~
10/10/2004 c1 43Toph Gonzalez
Wow! You are definitely getting better!~
10/9/2004 c1 9twilightwriter07
Another good haiku...hehe. Well done. ^_^
10/9/2004 c1 72linaeve
Hello. I like your haiku (too)! I'm feeling the passion :D
thanks for the review.
lin
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