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12/1/2005 c1 32Cyro Kraken
its good my dog's name is hero he was hit by a car I think he is like your story
9/7/2005 c1 Brando Bush
I see I have a lot to learn, there is so much emotion in this, and the title is brillant.
6/19/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
I like your diction and tone. Often plagued by inner demons.
10/11/2004 c1 48Boejangles
wow...emotional..powerful...I liked it alot keep up the good work :) and good luck on future works
BOE
10/3/2004 c1 49AnnaSun
Hi,
Liked this.
Please R+R my poems.
Thanks for sharing :)
10/2/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
I think everyone knows this fealing (to a lesser extent), that of dissapointment in oneself for not doing more, and eating away at ourselves for it. Nicely worded piece. My favourite bit is "as the flood swims behind them".
Stones decay, words last
Nick
10/2/2004 c1 1Xandir
First of all, thank you very much for the review on my story. I'm glad you liked it so far. ^^
Second of all, unfortunately this is the only one I've read of yours, because I am unbelievably tired. ^^; I promise I'll get to the others sometime soon.
Third of all, from what I see so far, your writing skills are very good. ^^ Keep up the awesome work.
I promise you, I WILL get to the others! ..soon. xD
~Diethel

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