
6/1/2005 c1
3Pont
Whoa... don't shoot me! *ducks*
great job! I love the little smug grin I can just picture on the silent one's face ^_^ (if arrows could grin, I guess)
Keep writing!lait-le nil! (dang, it's been ages since I exercised my quenya!)~Ponteh

Whoa... don't shoot me! *ducks*
great job! I love the little smug grin I can just picture on the silent one's face ^_^ (if arrows could grin, I guess)
Keep writing!lait-le nil! (dang, it's been ages since I exercised my quenya!)~Ponteh
11/28/2004 c1
14Aberrant Bliss
Oh, wow! Thsi si a good poem!
also, thank you for reviewing mine.
Somebody actually reviewed! Yay!
thanks for the helpful pointers.
once again, nice poem!

Oh, wow! Thsi si a good poem!
also, thank you for reviewing mine.
Somebody actually reviewed! Yay!
thanks for the helpful pointers.
once again, nice poem!
10/10/2004 c1
123Raya Dronaile
This was very cool, i liked it! i love the descriptions and the details. Very awesome poem, its going in my fav's

This was very cool, i liked it! i love the descriptions and the details. Very awesome poem, its going in my fav's
10/8/2004 c1
194Aslan Israel
Turned out to be different from what I thought it would be, but I like it never the less. Very original. Nice work.

Turned out to be different from what I thought it would be, but I like it never the less. Very original. Nice work.
10/4/2004 c1
8Amara Ryden
nice job.
this reminds me of the movie 'Timeline' and the fire/night arrows that they had...

nice job.
this reminds me of the movie 'Timeline' and the fire/night arrows that they had...
10/3/2004 c1
42Mr. Arnold
Interesting i wonder what you are refering to with the term night arrow though. Maybe it is a kind of unexpected horror that takes your life even though the imanent deadly threat can be avoided? good poem please R&R some of my work

Interesting i wonder what you are refering to with the term night arrow though. Maybe it is a kind of unexpected horror that takes your life even though the imanent deadly threat can be avoided? good poem please R&R some of my work