for Death12/24/2004 c1 
6cheerupnemokid
I like this one. It's good. It reminds me ... of like yah know .. death! lol
6cheerupnemokidI like this one. It's good. It reminds me ... of like yah know .. death! lol
11/28/2004 c1 31willowzbitch
Nice if a little macabre depiction of the circle of life. I enjoyed it very much, your rhyming had flow which is hard to find and the words you used slotted in well. Chris.
31willowzbitchNice if a little macabre depiction of the circle of life. I enjoyed it very much, your rhyming had flow which is hard to find and the words you used slotted in well. Chris.