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3/13/2008 c6 73aims80
I am really liking this story so far. I see though I've got a fair bit left in it to read as well as the next few sequels...
I know what you mean about being busy with your Ph.D since I am currently doing mine too. What are you doing yours in?
And thanks for still reading my "English Roses" stories- I appreciate it! :)
I am really liking this story so far. I see though I've got a fair bit left in it to read as well as the next few sequels...
I know what you mean about being busy with your Ph.D since I am currently doing mine too. What are you doing yours in?
And thanks for still reading my "English Roses" stories- I appreciate it! :)
6/14/2005 c12 caleb
good so far. however, do you mean "arrest" warrant instead of a "search" warrant? it's just confusing when you say that "the police have issued a search warrant on angela"...it might be better if that was "arrest warrant."
and then there's the fact that a person can't be tried twice for the same thing...it's called "double jeopardy".
good so far. however, do you mean "arrest" warrant instead of a "search" warrant? it's just confusing when you say that "the police have issued a search warrant on angela"...it might be better if that was "arrest warrant."
and then there's the fact that a person can't be tried twice for the same thing...it's called "double jeopardy".
6/14/2005 c10 caleb
sometimes it pays to snoop, huh?
sometimes it pays to snoop, huh?
5/3/2005 c23 6Silver-Dragon5
Woohoo! Finally, the kiss and it was perfectly written. Her hesitancy but unconscious nod. The thrill of it all. It was perfect and I'm so glad that it happened.
You are a talented writer and I am impressed by the fact that you can write and complete four stories already. Thats amazing and excellent. I'll be keeping an eye out for Manda Rider 5 and will definitely read it when you start publishing.
Wonderful Job!
~Silver
Woohoo! Finally, the kiss and it was perfectly written. Her hesitancy but unconscious nod. The thrill of it all. It was perfect and I'm so glad that it happened.
You are a talented writer and I am impressed by the fact that you can write and complete four stories already. Thats amazing and excellent. I'll be keeping an eye out for Manda Rider 5 and will definitely read it when you start publishing.
Wonderful Job!
~Silver
5/3/2005 c22 Silver-Dragon5
What's going to happen? One chapter left and still no kiss! Argh!
~Silver
What's going to happen? One chapter left and still no kiss! Argh!
~Silver
5/3/2005 c21 Silver-Dragon5
Excellent again. I know I'm sounding like a broken record but what else can I say? If its excellent, its excellent!
Though theres only two chapters to go! Manda and Michael had better kiss soon. They both like each other and its evident- so they have gotta kiss!
~Silver
Excellent again. I know I'm sounding like a broken record but what else can I say? If its excellent, its excellent!
Though theres only two chapters to go! Manda and Michael had better kiss soon. They both like each other and its evident- so they have gotta kiss!
~Silver
5/3/2005 c20 Silver-Dragon5
Whoa this case is fairly heavy! Talk about the want Manda dead for some reason.
~Silver
Whoa this case is fairly heavy! Talk about the want Manda dead for some reason.
~Silver
5/3/2005 c18 Silver-Dragon5
A broken back. I hope that doesn't lead to any more serious injuries.
Great chapter! I've still got more to go though, so I'd better get back to it.
~Silver
A broken back. I hope that doesn't lead to any more serious injuries.
Great chapter! I've still got more to go though, so I'd better get back to it.
~Silver
5/3/2005 c17 Silver-Dragon5
Poor Manda. She sure has a nack for getting herself into trouble.
~Silver
Poor Manda. She sure has a nack for getting herself into trouble.
~Silver
5/3/2005 c16 Silver-Dragon5
Wow that scene with Manda and Michael was wonderfully written. I could feel Manda's heartbreak. Unfortunately it is about time for her to realise what she has been doing in her stubborness and she needs to understand her true feelings that all point to LOVE!
~Silver
Wow that scene with Manda and Michael was wonderfully written. I could feel Manda's heartbreak. Unfortunately it is about time for her to realise what she has been doing in her stubborness and she needs to understand her true feelings that all point to LOVE!
~Silver
5/3/2005 c15 Silver-Dragon5
Oh, they should sleep together for warmth. lol. Why won't they hook up? This is driving me crazy! lol
~Silver
Oh, they should sleep together for warmth. lol. Why won't they hook up? This is driving me crazy! lol
~Silver
5/3/2005 c14 Silver-Dragon5
Interesting. At first I thought they would be caught by the police, but maybe whoever is setting up Angela (if it is a setup), is not someone we've been introduced to yet. I'm enjoying everything so far.
~Silver
Interesting. At first I thought they would be caught by the police, but maybe whoever is setting up Angela (if it is a setup), is not someone we've been introduced to yet. I'm enjoying everything so far.
~Silver
5/3/2005 c13 Silver-Dragon5
If Angela is actually innocent, which I'm not quite sure of because she a conniving little witch, then who put the vial in her basket? Was it someone in her family or maybe a police officer.
I really hope Michael doesn't marry Angela. Another great chapter!
~Silver
If Angela is actually innocent, which I'm not quite sure of because she a conniving little witch, then who put the vial in her basket? Was it someone in her family or maybe a police officer.
I really hope Michael doesn't marry Angela. Another great chapter!
~Silver
5/3/2005 c12 Silver-Dragon5
And the plot thickens once more!
You know what I would love to happen in one of your stories- I would love for Manda to go to a fancy do hosted by say Michael's family and, of course she's not really invited and Michael drags her to it- but she comes all dressed up and gorgeous and people almost die of shock upon seeing her, especially Michael. Now, don't think that I want you to change the way she dresses all the time, because that would wreck her character, but just once I would love to see her inner beauty reflected in her appearance for everyone to see.
~Silver
And the plot thickens once more!
You know what I would love to happen in one of your stories- I would love for Manda to go to a fancy do hosted by say Michael's family and, of course she's not really invited and Michael drags her to it- but she comes all dressed up and gorgeous and people almost die of shock upon seeing her, especially Michael. Now, don't think that I want you to change the way she dresses all the time, because that would wreck her character, but just once I would love to see her inner beauty reflected in her appearance for everyone to see.
~Silver