for The God of All Things12/18/2005 c2 aaidenkae
i didnt like this one as much as the first. the repetition of the word fall in the first two lines sort of took away from the beauty of the poem but overall it was good. i liked it. thank you.-kae
i didnt like this one as much as the first. the repetition of the word fall in the first two lines sort of took away from the beauty of the poem but overall it was good. i liked it. thank you.-kae
12/16/2005 c1 aaidenkae
this was really nice. i LOVED it and im not one who really likes haikus. this was great thank you!-kae
this was really nice. i LOVED it and im not one who really likes haikus. this was great thank you!-kae
1/20/2005 c2 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
You should continue! They're both nice, short and sweet but I personally like 'Blue River' better, it's beautiful.
You should continue! They're both nice, short and sweet but I personally like 'Blue River' better, it's beautiful.
1/16/2005 c1 
79Summerdazed
ah..a favourite. u seldom find haikus about nature that is so lovely. :O)
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedah..a favourite. u seldom find haikus about nature that is so lovely. :O)
=summerdazed=
1/15/2005 c2 Galadh Niniel
Beautiful, I like the pun in "teared", and the idea of rain as God's tears. Please continue this collection, I really like it.
Beautiful, I like the pun in "teared", and the idea of rain as God's tears. Please continue this collection, I really like it.
10/12/2004 c1 127Eirien
Beautiful, you express the wonder of the creation process in a very creative, unique way yourself. Nice little piece.
127EirienBeautiful, you express the wonder of the creation process in a very creative, unique way yourself. Nice little piece.
10/5/2004 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
I love this. For some reason, it made me smile at the end. I'm not too good with reviewing haiku, so I hope you can forgive me for this horrible one.
47Anjeni WindsingerI love this. For some reason, it made me smile at the end. I'm not too good with reviewing haiku, so I hope you can forgive me for this horrible one.
10/5/2004 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
i like the comparison of God drawing a river in our world. keep up the great work
200Ashes of a Willowi like the comparison of God drawing a river in our world. keep up the great work