7/23/2009 c7 9Destiny1406
I was reading this story and just noticed that you haven't updated in about 3 or more years. Are you not going to ever finish this story? I wish that you would please update, but i don't think that will happen. Thanks.
I was reading this story and just noticed that you haven't updated in about 3 or more years. Are you not going to ever finish this story? I wish that you would please update, but i don't think that will happen. Thanks.
3/21/2008 c7 1A.V.Mackie
Aww. I read another one of your stories,(and absolutely love it!) and it also seems to have been abandoned like the last. Heh, the AN for this chappy is a total lie I see. :P I love your dialogue, its just brilliant, fast and witty, with some interesting characters and what looks like the beginning of and interesting story. I just hope you see this and maybe get back into writing, or putting your writing up on FP again. Sigh... :( Come back...pretty please? Your stuff is really good, and I'd love to read more of it, your sense of humour really makes me laugh. :)
Aww. I read another one of your stories,(and absolutely love it!) and it also seems to have been abandoned like the last. Heh, the AN for this chappy is a total lie I see. :P I love your dialogue, its just brilliant, fast and witty, with some interesting characters and what looks like the beginning of and interesting story. I just hope you see this and maybe get back into writing, or putting your writing up on FP again. Sigh... :( Come back...pretty please? Your stuff is really good, and I'd love to read more of it, your sense of humour really makes me laugh. :)
6/15/2007 c7 wearefullofpoo
okay, I have to be honest. when i first saw this story on Awaking Kills the Dream's profile, I didn't think it was going to be that great. But I read it anyway. and I LOVED IT! it was amazing. (the shift buttin and I aren't getting along right now, btw) so yeah. great story! (i wonder if that'll work?)
okay, I have to be honest. when i first saw this story on Awaking Kills the Dream's profile, I didn't think it was going to be that great. But I read it anyway. and I LOVED IT! it was amazing. (the shift buttin and I aren't getting along right now, btw) so yeah. great story! (i wonder if that'll work?)
2/19/2007 c7 3Zeela Ravena
I love it it breaks the cliché that people normally use for vampire story’s please write agine soon.
I love it it breaks the cliché that people normally use for vampire story’s please write agine soon.
2/3/2007 c1 La
Update, please. I've been looking forward to seeing what happens with Andarian and Mirielle since you stopped! I really want to see what happens with them, what happened to him upon his return, and what it's like in her new job. It's a very intriguing story, and it's sad it stops here.
Update, please. I've been looking forward to seeing what happens with Andarian and Mirielle since you stopped! I really want to see what happens with them, what happened to him upon his return, and what it's like in her new job. It's a very intriguing story, and it's sad it stops here.
12/30/2006 c7 33Slightly Obsessive
I have to say this is very interesting and well written! Keep it up!
I have to say this is very interesting and well written! Keep it up!
5/11/2006 c7 Camden-Rehab
This story is great, genuinely interesting and a pleasure to read. I hope you continue it soon.And when are we going to see Andy again! ^_^
This story is great, genuinely interesting and a pleasure to read. I hope you continue it soon.And when are we going to see Andy again! ^_^
3/8/2006 c7 Awaking kills the Dream
Well, what can I say? As always, I love it! ;)
But I do wish that those people telling you that you've made some spelling and punctuation errors could tell you exactly what, seeing as both you and I have over-looked them...XP It's not like I'll mysteriously overnight is going to see the mistakes I obviously over-looked the day before :P
~Awaking kills the Dream
Well, what can I say? As always, I love it! ;)
But I do wish that those people telling you that you've made some spelling and punctuation errors could tell you exactly what, seeing as both you and I have over-looked them...XP It's not like I'll mysteriously overnight is going to see the mistakes I obviously over-looked the day before :P
~Awaking kills the Dream
3/7/2006 c7 4Morgan Davis
cool. . . intriguing! i want more! hurry and update! oh and just a lil pointer try to make the chapters longer. the thought and character process gets cut off when you have to switch into a new chapter, it kid of makes a border type thing. as you can imagine this isnt good lol, my advice is to try combining two chapters together, i know it gives you less chapters but it make the story easier and more interesting to follow, great work though! you have talent! ;D
cool. . . intriguing! i want more! hurry and update! oh and just a lil pointer try to make the chapters longer. the thought and character process gets cut off when you have to switch into a new chapter, it kid of makes a border type thing. as you can imagine this isnt good lol, my advice is to try combining two chapters together, i know it gives you less chapters but it make the story easier and more interesting to follow, great work though! you have talent! ;D
3/4/2006 c7 8Ducky 06
good story! please do continue. i dont know what i would do if i had a bunch of vampires after me. well, actually i guess id ask them if i could be one of them.
good story! please do continue. i dont know what i would do if i had a bunch of vampires after me. well, actually i guess id ask them if i could be one of them.
2/28/2006 c1 Ducky 06
ha, that would suck major being killed by a vamp. i like your story. its cool how it's in first person.
ha, that would suck major being killed by a vamp. i like your story. its cool how it's in first person.
2/28/2006 c7 ChichiX
Good physical descriptions - you have a knack for those, don't you - this chapter is less polished than the others, but it's newer. Tension is moutning - she's trying to rescue someone she doesn't even know is in trouble - but I can sympathize with her decision. She can't help it, it's who she is.
Good physical descriptions - you have a knack for those, don't you - this chapter is less polished than the others, but it's newer. Tension is moutning - she's trying to rescue someone she doesn't even know is in trouble - but I can sympathize with her decision. She can't help it, it's who she is.