for Little Secret9/3/2005 c1 Sally-andersonn
I really love the explnation at the end. Really thoguhtful and philosophical about our world and how we perceive it.
I really love the explnation at the end. Really thoguhtful and philosophical about our world and how we perceive it.
1/18/2005 c1 
15Siriusly Evil
damn this is hella interesting and a person could find alot of meaning in it without the explanation
15Siriusly Evildamn this is hella interesting and a person could find alot of meaning in it without the explanation
1/3/2005 c1 11Angel 864
Nice. The word and flow really have a nice feel, they kind of envelope the reader with thoughts and feelings that are difficult to understand. Including your description was a great idea, because it clarifies a lot of the more metaphorical parts of your poem. Fav. part is: "Here then is your little secretWalk with those who are so frequentTo find their way above the restTo find themselves among the best"Good job.
11Angel 864Nice. The word and flow really have a nice feel, they kind of envelope the reader with thoughts and feelings that are difficult to understand. Including your description was a great idea, because it clarifies a lot of the more metaphorical parts of your poem. Fav. part is: "Here then is your little secretWalk with those who are so frequentTo find their way above the restTo find themselves among the best"Good job.
11/29/2004 c1 25noodlegirl 28
hey there this is really good i've already read all your work post more you're an awesome writer.-sammy-
25noodlegirl 28hey there this is really good i've already read all your work post more you're an awesome writer.-sammy-
11/22/2004 c1 22Toast n Guitars
This is really interesting. I've noticed that I write some of my most bizarre, but deep and thought provocing things at night. I guess I'm just a person of the night... saddly that makes mornings not so fun, but you do what you have to and write when you can. -Toast
22Toast n GuitarsThis is really interesting. I've noticed that I write some of my most bizarre, but deep and thought provocing things at night. I guess I'm just a person of the night... saddly that makes mornings not so fun, but you do what you have to and write when you can. -Toast
10/7/2004 c1 eviljackinthebox
wow. if I had an hour to sit here and write you the longest review in history, I would, because that poem deserved it. unfortunatly I only have about 5 minutes, so I'll try and make all my points as fast as possible. I stumbled across this poem a few minutes ago, but I checked out your user description, and you know my good friend emmy, and if she gave you a thumbs up, I knew you'd deserve it, so I checked out this poem. am I ever glad I did. the metaphors, the usage of our great language... I am flabbergasted, astounded, and completely blown away by your talent. there was not one line in the entire work of art that was not perfect. you describe the human life in such an interesting way, that if the reader can actually understand it... (haha, I love the complex language... if the reader needs a dictionary, it's good) ... then they know how amazing it is. I can't make any more references, as my time is up and I have to go... but I am definately adding you to my favourite authors list and my author alerts, and I hope that you continue to erite such inspirational poetry!
best regards,
eviljackinthebox
wow. if I had an hour to sit here and write you the longest review in history, I would, because that poem deserved it. unfortunatly I only have about 5 minutes, so I'll try and make all my points as fast as possible. I stumbled across this poem a few minutes ago, but I checked out your user description, and you know my good friend emmy, and if she gave you a thumbs up, I knew you'd deserve it, so I checked out this poem. am I ever glad I did. the metaphors, the usage of our great language... I am flabbergasted, astounded, and completely blown away by your talent. there was not one line in the entire work of art that was not perfect. you describe the human life in such an interesting way, that if the reader can actually understand it... (haha, I love the complex language... if the reader needs a dictionary, it's good) ... then they know how amazing it is. I can't make any more references, as my time is up and I have to go... but I am definately adding you to my favourite authors list and my author alerts, and I hope that you continue to erite such inspirational poetry!
best regards,
eviljackinthebox
10/7/2004 c1 26Deep Shadows
wow.
This poem just evoked a lot of emotions in me, you were great in showing what you meant even if it got a bit confusing. Keep it up.
Toodles,
Deep Shadows
26Deep Shadowswow.
This poem just evoked a lot of emotions in me, you were great in showing what you meant even if it got a bit confusing. Keep it up.
Toodles,
Deep Shadows