for Ivy Shadow4/22/2007 c1 
4Abysmal Tr3pidation
This is so descriptive. I love it, you should write more poems just like this one because it is B-E-A-UTIFUL.
Keep writing.
~**~Indiana~**~
4Abysmal Tr3pidationThis is so descriptive. I love it, you should write more poems just like this one because it is B-E-A-UTIFUL.
Keep writing.
~**~Indiana~**~
7/11/2006 c1 Only Infamous
That was excellent! I liked the rhymes and the way you made the statue (I assume it was one..?) seem human was so well done. Keep it up, PLEASE. ^_^
-xoxo-
That was excellent! I liked the rhymes and the way you made the statue (I assume it was one..?) seem human was so well done. Keep it up, PLEASE. ^_^
-xoxo-
7/4/2006 c1 56felicia13
Oh .. sad. Good, though.
I liked "They placed a rose in her hand,/Thornless with age, a marble bud." It was just .. um .. really good and it was just a really nice image. Good job!
Lots of other good images, that I don't feel like pointing out at the moment. Just know that I thought it was a good poem.
all my love,felicia
p.s. I thought your profile was funny.
56felicia13Oh .. sad. Good, though.
I liked "They placed a rose in her hand,/Thornless with age, a marble bud." It was just .. um .. really good and it was just a really nice image. Good job!
Lots of other good images, that I don't feel like pointing out at the moment. Just know that I thought it was a good poem.
all my love,felicia
p.s. I thought your profile was funny.
3/20/2006 c1 28fuzzy-logik21
thank you for the review. made me feel happy. lol. now, onto your poem. i like it. it gives me an image of maybe being limited, being held-back. Oh, what's the word i want? dang, i don't know. anyway, good poetry. there's definitely a ton of imagery. best lines, "the songbirds taught her to sing / but her lips were not made to part" it leaves this hauntingly beautiful image of being imprisoned by those that you love and that love you.
toodles, thanks again for the review! peace love and cheese.
28fuzzy-logik21thank you for the review. made me feel happy. lol. now, onto your poem. i like it. it gives me an image of maybe being limited, being held-back. Oh, what's the word i want? dang, i don't know. anyway, good poetry. there's definitely a ton of imagery. best lines, "the songbirds taught her to sing / but her lips were not made to part" it leaves this hauntingly beautiful image of being imprisoned by those that you love and that love you.
toodles, thanks again for the review! peace love and cheese.
3/12/2006 c1 gagaga
uhm.. wow, you're really good.. you like literature that much.. i failed it sometimes.. thanks for the tip, and i really didn't mean to give myself a review, it was for somebody else.. don't know how the system works, haha.. THANKS again...
uhm.. wow, you're really good.. you like literature that much.. i failed it sometimes.. thanks for the tip, and i really didn't mean to give myself a review, it was for somebody else.. don't know how the system works, haha.. THANKS again...
12/16/2005 c1 1strawberry-margaritha
Nice poem! Kinda sad, but its good. The name caught my eye... "ivy shadow" Sounds cool. I like that it rhymes. I've always felt that poems that don't rhym are kinda wierd...
1strawberry-margarithaNice poem! Kinda sad, but its good. The name caught my eye... "ivy shadow" Sounds cool. I like that it rhymes. I've always felt that poems that don't rhym are kinda wierd...
10/10/2004 c1 Sugar.baboon
*You* wrote this? Wowee, talk about pretty imagery.
I now have a picture of a slowly eroding, moss covered yet beautiful statue imprinted into my mind.
Haunting and very nice. Watch out, I may indeed rearrange the verses and publish it in my name... You shall get 5% of the royalties ~
-sugary bananas rock my world-
*You* wrote this? Wowee, talk about pretty imagery.
I now have a picture of a slowly eroding, moss covered yet beautiful statue imprinted into my mind.
Haunting and very nice. Watch out, I may indeed rearrange the verses and publish it in my name... You shall get 5% of the royalties ~
-sugary bananas rock my world-
10/8/2004 c1 85grim-dreamer
"Laughing, halfheartedly the wind proposed,/Then left her lonely to the night."
Favourite line in the poem. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this poem; many poets forget the wonders of punctuation.
85grim-dreamer"Laughing, halfheartedly the wind proposed,/Then left her lonely to the night."
Favourite line in the poem. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this poem; many poets forget the wonders of punctuation.
10/8/2004 c1 74laughter at the funeral
ohh..this is good...reminds me of the nymphs...oh my...you really did a good job...oh and pls...if you have the time pls do review some of my works...thanks...good luck and take care...
74laughter at the funeralohh..this is good...reminds me of the nymphs...oh my...you really did a good job...oh and pls...if you have the time pls do review some of my works...thanks...good luck and take care...