for Succession: Pirate5/26/2013 c10 Scribe of Elhnaka
Great story! I like the way you combine cultural references (Japanese/European) to create your own distinct style. Your characters are very personal and up close, and I like the develop your main character. The twists and turns are abrupt, so you never know what is going to happen next. Look forward to continue reading!
Great story! I like the way you combine cultural references (Japanese/European) to create your own distinct style. Your characters are very personal and up close, and I like the develop your main character. The twists and turns are abrupt, so you never know what is going to happen next. Look forward to continue reading!
5/22/2013 c10 
3Viking Berserker
Indeed I recomend this story to any who wish to read it. Great character dynamic, beyond interesting plot, awesome dialoge which never feels forced, and exotic locales that are deep and rich with lore.
3Viking BerserkerIndeed I recomend this story to any who wish to read it. Great character dynamic, beyond interesting plot, awesome dialoge which never feels forced, and exotic locales that are deep and rich with lore.
12/15/2004 c2 110KonekOniko
WAH! I can't believe this story has so few reviews! I agree with Kai-lovergrl, you definately deserve more. This chapter was an enjoyable read, I love the way you describe things :) Anyways, I want to leave you a nice, long review, but I have to go do my work! Hope to see an update from you soon!
~Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain
110KonekOnikoWAH! I can't believe this story has so few reviews! I agree with Kai-lovergrl, you definately deserve more. This chapter was an enjoyable read, I love the way you describe things :) Anyways, I want to leave you a nice, long review, but I have to go do my work! Hope to see an update from you soon!
~Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain
12/5/2004 c2 1kailovergrl
Woa, AWESOME job on this chapter! please updatem opre and i love how you write your words.
I honestly don't know why this story doesn't have any reviews. This story should have lots! please update this story. It's so good.
i'll be waiting! ^^
1kailovergrlWoa, AWESOME job on this chapter! please updatem opre and i love how you write your words.
I honestly don't know why this story doesn't have any reviews. This story should have lots! please update this story. It's so good.
i'll be waiting! ^^
12/5/2004 c1 kailovergrl
wow, this was greatly written with style! I liked this first chapter a lot. i'm going to second chapter now.
wow, this was greatly written with style! I liked this first chapter a lot. i'm going to second chapter now.
11/30/2004 c1 110KonekOniko
Hmn, I don't see why this hasn't gotten any reviews yet; I love the style you used in writing this, elegant, yet (seemingly) old-English, something I could never achieve. Amazing...hope you update this soon or else it'd be a waste of talent!
~Sumi-chan
Tickle me Pickle!
110KonekOnikoHmn, I don't see why this hasn't gotten any reviews yet; I love the style you used in writing this, elegant, yet (seemingly) old-English, something I could never achieve. Amazing...hope you update this soon or else it'd be a waste of talent!
~Sumi-chan
Tickle me Pickle!