for Café Epiphany12/17/2004 c1 
96Kowski
Incredible poem. I commend your talant..keep it up, you are by far the most talanted poet that I have had the pleasure of reading.
As for the poem, awesome imagery, I could feel the sense of opression and (what's the word i'm looking for...) well i can't think of the word (i just woke up, see) but it was conveyed perfectly!
Great job!
96KowskiIncredible poem. I commend your talant..keep it up, you are by far the most talanted poet that I have had the pleasure of reading.
As for the poem, awesome imagery, I could feel the sense of opression and (what's the word i'm looking for...) well i can't think of the word (i just woke up, see) but it was conveyed perfectly!
Great job!
11/3/2004 c1 6Ad Seven
You say the words aren't the best, maybe, but the rhytm is awfully great! I got the feeling, the strange feeling you probably wanted the reader to get. It's interesting how style and theme can make a great poem on their own! Keep them coming!
6Ad SevenYou say the words aren't the best, maybe, but the rhytm is awfully great! I got the feeling, the strange feeling you probably wanted the reader to get. It's interesting how style and theme can make a great poem on their own! Keep them coming!
10/22/2004 c1 89Crucified Sanctity
Thats really good! :) Very clever, remind me alot of the nile for some reason :S It gained a rather dark tone by the end i though, just when you finish the coffee, your heart sinks. I dunno really I dont drink coffee :S
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89Crucified SanctityThats really good! :) Very clever, remind me alot of the nile for some reason :S It gained a rather dark tone by the end i though, just when you finish the coffee, your heart sinks. I dunno really I dont drink coffee :S
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10/21/2004 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
this is good, DD, I really like the technique. " a morass of swaying beings" and "people ebb and flow", they're really good lines. Keep it up.
82Twilit Exaggerancethis is good, DD, I really like the technique. " a morass of swaying beings" and "people ebb and flow", they're really good lines. Keep it up.