for Snare11/29/2004 c1 
46Lan Jian
wow, i stumbled upon this and wow. just the first sentence drew me in. ur writing's awesome! i hope u continue this piece, its beautifully written.
46Lan Jianwow, i stumbled upon this and wow. just the first sentence drew me in. ur writing's awesome! i hope u continue this piece, its beautifully written.
10/15/2004 c1 4Nightmare Alley
This is really a great piece of art, you have great description skills. If it were a finished product, I'm sure you could send it in and get published on the spot.
4Nightmare AlleyThis is really a great piece of art, you have great description skills. If it were a finished product, I'm sure you could send it in and get published on the spot.