7/29/2005 c11 3miss-blackhair
whoa! i feel so loved! lol.. =) anw, the chapp is good. but i think more descriptions would be nice.. i like Zander, partly coz i like the name.. hee hee.. and despites few typos, it rawks! especially the ending.. update soon..!
ps: you can check out my story too, if you wanna.. hahah
whoa! i feel so loved! lol.. =) anw, the chapp is good. but i think more descriptions would be nice.. i like Zander, partly coz i like the name.. hee hee.. and despites few typos, it rawks! especially the ending.. update soon..!
ps: you can check out my story too, if you wanna.. hahah
7/26/2005 c9 livelyforest
your story is really good mine is like crap compared to your plz keep writing you can't stop now it would just be crule cuz i'm already hooked on it
your story is really good mine is like crap compared to your plz keep writing you can't stop now it would just be crule cuz i'm already hooked on it