for Falling9/30/2006 c1 
6Hole Buddies
this was a pretty good first chapter and i only caught one or two spelling errors. also "7 ft." this is uncommon in most stories and should be written out as *seven feet* just a suggestion
6Hole Buddiesthis was a pretty good first chapter and i only caught one or two spelling errors. also "7 ft." this is uncommon in most stories and should be written out as *seven feet* just a suggestion
10/16/2004 c1 325Red Vision
great imagery, you are very good at describing the passeges. I like this,i've always been fascinated with angels, great job. Check out my stories, i've worked hard on them, check them out and tell me what you think. :)
325Red Visiongreat imagery, you are very good at describing the passeges. I like this,i've always been fascinated with angels, great job. Check out my stories, i've worked hard on them, check them out and tell me what you think. :)