for Sunshine12/19/2005 c1 
20sloppy firsts
wheni read this i get an image of a child staring up towards the sun. powerful imagery here.
well done.
20sloppy firstswheni read this i get an image of a child staring up towards the sun. powerful imagery here.
well done.
1/21/2005 c1 12Rocky G
I cant believe this is your first haiku, its beautiful excellent work. :)
Rocky
12Rocky GI cant believe this is your first haiku, its beautiful excellent work. :)
Rocky
1/1/2005 c1 David Stephen
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! I loved this! It was so excellent! The imagery was fantastic - and the words painted a beautiful picture. Wow I am so impressed! ~DS~
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! I loved this! It was so excellent! The imagery was fantastic - and the words painted a beautiful picture. Wow I am so impressed! ~DS~
10/23/2004 c1 14Scales of Sapphire
is pretty... *tears in eyes* You worrk is really good compared to mine.
14Scales of Sapphireis pretty... *tears in eyes* You worrk is really good compared to mine.