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10/17/2004 c1 Henry
Hey. I really like the lines of rhyming thrown in with these slightly dissonant lines here. It hads a cool effect that I think builds up the title, "Mixed Feelings." I also like that tinge of sarcasm in that third rhyming couplet in the first stanza.
The last stanza is also magnificent, and it's funny how good it sounds even without a rhyme. It's like a mutual dissonance that creates a strong harmony (yeah, Joan of Arcadia).

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