1/1/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Green—Your rolling breasts,
Turquoise you came forth from sea,
Mermaid—Algae—Queen. —m—
Green—Your rolling breasts,
Turquoise you came forth from sea,
Mermaid—Algae—Queen. —m—
1/1/2005 c1 David Stephen
Wow - once again a beautiful Haiku with beautiful images - these are inspirational! Keep up this excellent work!
Wow - once again a beautiful Haiku with beautiful images - these are inspirational! Keep up this excellent work!
10/19/2004 c1 32Demodocus
A fresh, enlivening perspective on a topic many view as mundane. Not me, of course. I love the imagery in this, especially in line 2. You have a wonderful talent here. At some point I might write a short story too. By the bye, thanks for reviewing my piece; it was sweet of you to like my user name, especially since I'm male! Feel free to drop me a line if you wanna chat or something. Incidentally, a college chum of mine and I used to sit in a graveyard near campus and just talk: about life, friends, pretty much anything. Those were some of the best times of my life. We went at night too. Mark sometimes swore he could see movement even when no one was around! Okay, sorry, I'm getting off topic. Great haikmu! Keep writing. Bryan
A fresh, enlivening perspective on a topic many view as mundane. Not me, of course. I love the imagery in this, especially in line 2. You have a wonderful talent here. At some point I might write a short story too. By the bye, thanks for reviewing my piece; it was sweet of you to like my user name, especially since I'm male! Feel free to drop me a line if you wanna chat or something. Incidentally, a college chum of mine and I used to sit in a graveyard near campus and just talk: about life, friends, pretty much anything. Those were some of the best times of my life. We went at night too. Mark sometimes swore he could see movement even when no one was around! Okay, sorry, I'm getting off topic. Great haikmu! Keep writing. Bryan