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10/19/2004 c1 Artemis Astralstar
Now, this is a hard one to review without offering badly given advice. If I talk about the structure, I can only speak for so long. Ditto with the words, the rhythm.
I can see the person in this poem - you. I see it very vividly, and that shows how powerful the poem is. It's stark, and blunt, and in its way, beautiful.

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