10/4/2005 c1 39Moppish
Wow. You managed to use the word "syntax" in a poem TWICE. That's impressive. Lol, sorry, we just learned that word in english like a week ago so I was like HEY SYNTAX I KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.

This is extraordinarily interesting. I don't quite understand it yet but there are a lot of really good things in here. I like your solitairy line stanzas inbetween the larger ones.

10/28/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
awesome! the wording is good, i really like how its set up