for Ballad of the Caitiff's Reprieve2/18/2005 c4 
13Rhea De'Aqua
Wow. This is really good. Like really f-g good. Ga! I steal you talent! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
13Rhea De'AquaWow. This is really good. Like really f-g good. Ga! I steal you talent! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
2/2/2005 c4 22Loki Mischeif-Maker
Awesome end to the poem - wow. Good imagry, good discription, good characterization - not an error I can see (but them I'm horrible at critiquing poetry. . . .)
All in all, awesome poem!
Cheer!
22Loki Mischeif-MakerAwesome end to the poem - wow. Good imagry, good discription, good characterization - not an error I can see (but them I'm horrible at critiquing poetry. . . .)
All in all, awesome poem!
Cheer!
11/9/2004 c3 Loki Mischeif-Maker
Yay! An update!
WHAT DISASTER? It's one of two, but I can't be sure which! Oh. . . you're good at suspense. Lovely language, too btw.
I'm enjoying your poem, and I can offer you no criticism. . . .
Cheers!
Yay! An update!
WHAT DISASTER? It's one of two, but I can't be sure which! Oh. . . you're good at suspense. Lovely language, too btw.
I'm enjoying your poem, and I can offer you no criticism. . . .
Cheers!
10/27/2004 c2 Loki Mischeif-Maker
Good continuation- I, at least, want more!
Good discription, even in poem form your characterization is awesome. What does the demon do? You've raised enough questions you must update!
Cheers!
Good continuation- I, at least, want more!
Good discription, even in poem form your characterization is awesome. What does the demon do? You've raised enough questions you must update!
Cheers!
10/20/2004 c1 Loki Mischeif-Maker
It sounds good. You've got this awesome thing going between the girl and the demon; and in some ways, the guy. Love the fox comparison, btw. Good discription, too.
Hm . . . might want to switch this to the fantasy poetry section, though, might get more readers. . . .
Update soon; I want to know what the girl does!
Cheers!
It sounds good. You've got this awesome thing going between the girl and the demon; and in some ways, the guy. Love the fox comparison, btw. Good discription, too.
Hm . . . might want to switch this to the fantasy poetry section, though, might get more readers. . . .
Update soon; I want to know what the girl does!
Cheers!