for Edge2/14/2005 c1 
8Kiyoe
hello it is me bood. actually i have read pretty much all of your stories already. i just suck at reviews. i really like your writing. it's so blunt and truthful. i like. ^_^
8Kiyoehello it is me bood. actually i have read pretty much all of your stories already. i just suck at reviews. i really like your writing. it's so blunt and truthful. i like. ^_^
2/14/2005 c1 2yellowchucks
This is really good, very well written. Now, I'm off to go read something else of yours!
2yellowchucksThis is really good, very well written. Now, I'm off to go read something else of yours!
2/9/2005 c1 the naked civil servant
this is excellent. i will now proceed to read your other stories. i love :
I stare at her lips blankly.
Am I dead?
I don't know why. it's just genius. i love the whole thing actually... it's very... well it's excellently written. hm. genius.
this is excellent. i will now proceed to read your other stories. i love :
I stare at her lips blankly.
Am I dead?
I don't know why. it's just genius. i love the whole thing actually... it's very... well it's excellently written. hm. genius.
1/4/2005 c1 1The Restock Bandits
Love it. I will never ever get addicted to coke now. Ever (not like I was planning on it in the first place).
1The Restock BanditsLove it. I will never ever get addicted to coke now. Ever (not like I was planning on it in the first place).
1/1/2005 c1 49SleepDontWeep
o my god!... that is... truly amazing!i love how u describe the light and the way he sees everyone and the way he sees everyone else!and how he barely notices the unimportant things!his parents seem really cool.. id love my parents to just leave me alone sumtimes.. stupid them caring bout me!the way u describe Sadie and Ryan's actions really makes them seem stoned!they're so random and giggly!I like the subtle entry of the fact that he loves Megan!its wonderful!its a very strante ending though! and i feel as though i want you to continue it!will u think about continueing it?ur profile is funny!fight club is a really unusual movie and i think its cool!Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind is by far one of my fave movies.. along with donnie darko!'Sand is overrated'anyways WELL done!love and admiration GRetchen45 xxplease review my story 'Truly Madly Deeply' as it wud mean alot! x
49SleepDontWeepo my god!... that is... truly amazing!i love how u describe the light and the way he sees everyone and the way he sees everyone else!and how he barely notices the unimportant things!his parents seem really cool.. id love my parents to just leave me alone sumtimes.. stupid them caring bout me!the way u describe Sadie and Ryan's actions really makes them seem stoned!they're so random and giggly!I like the subtle entry of the fact that he loves Megan!its wonderful!its a very strante ending though! and i feel as though i want you to continue it!will u think about continueing it?ur profile is funny!fight club is a really unusual movie and i think its cool!Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind is by far one of my fave movies.. along with donnie darko!'Sand is overrated'anyways WELL done!love and admiration GRetchen45 xxplease review my story 'Truly Madly Deeply' as it wud mean alot! x
12/23/2004 c1 2RetrogradeHeadspin
As to your previous question, nah, I don't have the Jimmy Eat World CD, but I like the song, and for some the reason the title of it seemed good for a chapter title to me.You hate the word "meh"? Then lord only knows how you'd survive around me. Chances are, when I actually DO speak, I mumble stuff as as "meh" and my laugh is most often not a "laugh" at all, but a smirk and the word "heh".Well now... Onto reviewing your fic, like I'm SUPPOSED to be doing...I honestly am curious as to what's going to happen next. It's a plot-type that I've seen done before, but I think that this has got more potential than being just another cliched piece of writing.Good job.
2RetrogradeHeadspinAs to your previous question, nah, I don't have the Jimmy Eat World CD, but I like the song, and for some the reason the title of it seemed good for a chapter title to me.You hate the word "meh"? Then lord only knows how you'd survive around me. Chances are, when I actually DO speak, I mumble stuff as as "meh" and my laugh is most often not a "laugh" at all, but a smirk and the word "heh".Well now... Onto reviewing your fic, like I'm SUPPOSED to be doing...I honestly am curious as to what's going to happen next. It's a plot-type that I've seen done before, but I think that this has got more potential than being just another cliched piece of writing.Good job.