
12/25/2005 c1
19Pink Sparrow
This is so pretty! I love the way its written and the rhyming is amazing. I like the repitition of the line -'Twin sounds, a silent beating.' I love this poem. Very well written!

This is so pretty! I love the way its written and the rhyming is amazing. I like the repitition of the line -'Twin sounds, a silent beating.' I love this poem. Very well written!
12/25/2005 c1
39SliversofSilverPain
that is so swet! love it! "reapers shed no tears for death...the moon's solitude, flickering... in reply the night sighed softly." this is AMAZING! brilliant! so haunting and almost sad. beautiful. well written indeed

that is so swet! love it! "reapers shed no tears for death...the moon's solitude, flickering... in reply the night sighed softly." this is AMAZING! brilliant! so haunting and almost sad. beautiful. well written indeed
1/9/2005 c1
80Visions of Harmony
EXCELLENT!
Beautiful and just so amazing! Incredible!
*doesn't know what else to say*
wow!

EXCELLENT!
Beautiful and just so amazing! Incredible!
*doesn't know what else to say*
wow!