for BLACK CHERRY5/6/2006 c25 
20Serpentine Wisdom
To be honest I've read better written fics with more descriptions and such but your story is so incredibly good that it's on par with many of them (sometimes even better) anyway. The narrative you've chosen is very difficult to write as well as you do and the interactions between your characters are simply amazing and very believable. I like how the story can move forward fast without having the feeling that it’s missing something.
Also the characters are all very likeable and easy to grow attached to (the interaction between Hitomi and Shin-chan is very funny and easy to relate to – for someone like me who has an annoying older brother). I can’t seem to get irritated with any of them, which is something that is very, very easy for me. The only one that even bothers me any is Kei, and that’s only because I’m rooting for Ryou/Hitomi instead of Kei/Hitomi.
I’m adding you to my favourite author and favourite stories lists
20Serpentine WisdomTo be honest I've read better written fics with more descriptions and such but your story is so incredibly good that it's on par with many of them (sometimes even better) anyway. The narrative you've chosen is very difficult to write as well as you do and the interactions between your characters are simply amazing and very believable. I like how the story can move forward fast without having the feeling that it’s missing something.
Also the characters are all very likeable and easy to grow attached to (the interaction between Hitomi and Shin-chan is very funny and easy to relate to – for someone like me who has an annoying older brother). I can’t seem to get irritated with any of them, which is something that is very, very easy for me. The only one that even bothers me any is Kei, and that’s only because I’m rooting for Ryou/Hitomi instead of Kei/Hitomi.
I’m adding you to my favourite author and favourite stories lists
5/5/2006 c25 Ms.Whiskers
I don't know why no matter how much KeiXHitomi i read, i still want to read some RyouXHitomi. Which pairing is this fic about again? Gah! i'm becoming oblivious.
Why are hitomi's fans not hot? Yeah. the man would be dead if Ryou heard that. *smirks*
Can't decide which is funnier... fanmail time or fanfiction? OMG 0_0 I can imagine Kei and Shiine's faces...red...very red...bwahahaha.
with the eternal words of every cliche review,Ms. Whiskers
I don't know why no matter how much KeiXHitomi i read, i still want to read some RyouXHitomi. Which pairing is this fic about again? Gah! i'm becoming oblivious.
Why are hitomi's fans not hot? Yeah. the man would be dead if Ryou heard that. *smirks*
Can't decide which is funnier... fanmail time or fanfiction? OMG 0_0 I can imagine Kei and Shiine's faces...red...very red...bwahahaha.
with the eternal words of every cliche review,Ms. Whiskers
4/30/2006 c25 sara
i really love this story. I always check if you have updated everytime i get a chance. that yaoi scene wasn't that bad so don't worry. if someone was offended by that they haven't seen some of the stuff that is out there. I don't like it but my friend does and she has brought to my attention some stuff i wish she hadn't. Any way great story, I can't wait for more.
i really love this story. I always check if you have updated everytime i get a chance. that yaoi scene wasn't that bad so don't worry. if someone was offended by that they haven't seen some of the stuff that is out there. I don't like it but my friend does and she has brought to my attention some stuff i wish she hadn't. Any way great story, I can't wait for more.
4/29/2006 c25 Lainex
*cackles* Me and my friends often wondered how bands would react upon seeing themselves in fanfiction. Kinda like, "You and me did a what? Where? How?" XD I'm loving this sotry to bits, especially this chapter!
*cackles* Me and my friends often wondered how bands would react upon seeing themselves in fanfiction. Kinda like, "You and me did a what? Where? How?" XD I'm loving this sotry to bits, especially this chapter!
4/28/2006 c1 Geht
I've only read this chapter so far, but the part where Hitomi-san tells that woman to get out, "'No, I'm her cousin,' I scathed, my jaw hardening. 'Nice to meet you, now get the hell out of here.'"
Shouldn't it say "No, I'm *his* cousin," I scathed, my jaw hardening. "Nice to meet you, now get the hell out of here."
She is referring to Shin-san there, right?
I've only read this chapter so far, but the part where Hitomi-san tells that woman to get out, "'No, I'm her cousin,' I scathed, my jaw hardening. 'Nice to meet you, now get the hell out of here.'"
Shouldn't it say "No, I'm *his* cousin," I scathed, my jaw hardening. "Nice to meet you, now get the hell out of here."
She is referring to Shin-san there, right?
4/26/2006 c25 fishdot
just here to support your story! ^_^ since you spoil me soo much! so come back hitomi-san's muse-chan so we can get the goody jrock boys in a massive orgies! _ don't yell at me! i just love yoai too much!
just here to support your story! ^_^ since you spoil me soo much! so come back hitomi-san's muse-chan so we can get the goody jrock boys in a massive orgies! _ don't yell at me! i just love yoai too much!
4/25/2006 c25 Kumo
Ohman! The scariness of fanfiction! Felt uber sorry for Kei and Shiine. This is probably how bands/the famous people feel when fans write fanfiction about them. I was giggling so much from Kei and Shiine's embarrasment. Gotta agree with Yuuichi about how the boys were affected...
XD
Oh, maybe, Ryou x Hitomi stuff will pop out, and the guys print it off just to be vindictive. Funny as! I hope you update soon. I'm loving this more each and every new chapter, if that's possible. =) Update soon, please. *giggle*
x x Kumo x x
Ohman! The scariness of fanfiction! Felt uber sorry for Kei and Shiine. This is probably how bands/the famous people feel when fans write fanfiction about them. I was giggling so much from Kei and Shiine's embarrasment. Gotta agree with Yuuichi about how the boys were affected...
XD
Oh, maybe, Ryou x Hitomi stuff will pop out, and the guys print it off just to be vindictive. Funny as! I hope you update soon. I'm loving this more each and every new chapter, if that's possible. =) Update soon, please. *giggle*
x x Kumo x x
4/24/2006 c25 2Aharah Musici
Great to read your stuff! It just makes me melt in my shoes ^_^. You are ALWAYS welcome to put LOADS of fanservice in your stories ^_^
2Aharah MusiciGreat to read your stuff! It just makes me melt in my shoes ^_^. You are ALWAYS welcome to put LOADS of fanservice in your stories ^_^
4/23/2006 c1 d0rkifi3d
/new reader/ my friend told me to read this its a long time ago...sorry I haven't reviewed til now. I just wanted to say your story is really good and original
/new reader/ my friend told me to read this its a long time ago...sorry I haven't reviewed til now. I just wanted to say your story is really good and original
4/23/2006 c25 dcopper
I just found your story today and I am very glaf for it. I laughed out loud so many times while reading it, and the latest chapter is a hoot to read! ^_^
Thanks for sharing the story, it is definitely a fav of mine now.
I just found your story today and I am very glaf for it. I laughed out loud so many times while reading it, and the latest chapter is a hoot to read! ^_^
Thanks for sharing the story, it is definitely a fav of mine now.
4/22/2006 c25 chocolate-philosophy
I know you once told me that you don't want to write a yaoi fic, but it sure seems to me that you're quite capable of it. Nice work on this chapter!
I know you once told me that you don't want to write a yaoi fic, but it sure seems to me that you're quite capable of it. Nice work on this chapter!