for BLACK CHERRY6/2/2012 c39 zinsama
Just a wild guess but perhaps the woman Reiji has been seeing is Asami?
This is getting more and more dramatic. (In a good way)
Just a wild guess but perhaps the woman Reiji has been seeing is Asami?
This is getting more and more dramatic. (In a good way)
6/1/2012 c35 zinsama
I love how you pay attention to even the littlest details (eg. when Ryou called Hitomi by her first name... as a half-Japanese myself I understand how precious that little moment was.) and I like the story line and characters alooooot.
And how cute was it when Ryou cut down his daily intake of cancer sticks? That was adorable. I'm still squealing in my seat here haha.
Kei happens to remind me very much of whats-his-name from DOUT. The lead singer whose name I've forgotten... Kouki or something? You'll perhaps see where I'm coming from if you watch their latest PV Aisuru Hito.
I love how you pay attention to even the littlest details (eg. when Ryou called Hitomi by her first name... as a half-Japanese myself I understand how precious that little moment was.) and I like the story line and characters alooooot.
And how cute was it when Ryou cut down his daily intake of cancer sticks? That was adorable. I'm still squealing in my seat here haha.
Kei happens to remind me very much of whats-his-name from DOUT. The lead singer whose name I've forgotten... Kouki or something? You'll perhaps see where I'm coming from if you watch their latest PV Aisuru Hito.
5/18/2012 c38 
4purple archer
Hey! It is I, back again to submit another review for this frackin' awesome story!
When are we going to see Hito-chan and Ryou do it? Cuz I REALLY want to see that. I am patiently waiting for it.
another awesome chapter, still an awesome story. keep it up!
4purple archerHey! It is I, back again to submit another review for this frackin' awesome story!
When are we going to see Hito-chan and Ryou do it? Cuz I REALLY want to see that. I am patiently waiting for it.
another awesome chapter, still an awesome story. keep it up!
5/16/2012 c36 1MissKukyMonster
I really love this story and I love that Hitomi is with Ryou! Thanks for updating so fast, it keeps me on my feet!
1MissKukyMonsterI really love this story and I love that Hitomi is with Ryou! Thanks for updating so fast, it keeps me on my feet!
5/16/2012 c36 4purple archer
Hey! Again, awesome couple of chapters. You write these way ahead of time and then update a couple a time, right? I'm starting to do the same thing. I've only updated chapter 7 of my story, but I'm working on chapter 18 right now!
So, anyway. I'm so glad Ryou and Hito-chan finally got together! And I hope Kei recovers fast (even though he was a little bit of a bastard). I can't believe Shinne got a girlfriend...and Mastu? Getting MARRIED. Jeez, this story is just getting happier and happier! I'm seriously bracing myself for someone to die. Whenever everyone in a story is all hunky-dory, there's always someone that just has to go and get themselves killed. PLEASE DON'T KILL THEM!
As usual, awesome chapters, awesome story, keep it up!
4purple archerHey! Again, awesome couple of chapters. You write these way ahead of time and then update a couple a time, right? I'm starting to do the same thing. I've only updated chapter 7 of my story, but I'm working on chapter 18 right now!
So, anyway. I'm so glad Ryou and Hito-chan finally got together! And I hope Kei recovers fast (even though he was a little bit of a bastard). I can't believe Shinne got a girlfriend...and Mastu? Getting MARRIED. Jeez, this story is just getting happier and happier! I'm seriously bracing myself for someone to die. Whenever everyone in a story is all hunky-dory, there's always someone that just has to go and get themselves killed. PLEASE DON'T KILL THEM!
As usual, awesome chapters, awesome story, keep it up!
5/15/2012 c30 purple archer
One more thing...
And the thing with Yuu? I totally knew it.
Yuu and Reiji sittin' in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G
And you know the rest.
One more thing...
And the thing with Yuu? I totally knew it.
Yuu and Reiji sittin' in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G
And you know the rest.
5/15/2012 c31 purple archer
Hey! Awesome couple of chapters, as usual. I am really starting to like this story. I love the relationship between Ryou and Hitomi. The pig was ADORABLE. Some manga stories SUCK (the ones that are always about demons or vampires or just sound cliche) but this one is really original, or at least of the things I've seen it is. Awesome plot, really interesting, I hope this story doesn't end too soon! Love it.
Hey! Awesome couple of chapters, as usual. I am really starting to like this story. I love the relationship between Ryou and Hitomi. The pig was ADORABLE. Some manga stories SUCK (the ones that are always about demons or vampires or just sound cliche) but this one is really original, or at least of the things I've seen it is. Awesome plot, really interesting, I hope this story doesn't end too soon! Love it.
5/12/2012 c25 purple archer
...Huh...Wow... I totally did not see that coming.
WHAT. THE. HELL. What was that? With the whole, "Oh, look! Your man-whore boyfriend is cheating on you and the guy you thought hated you is actually in love with you! Let's watch them slowly tear up their friendship and get into a big fight! And let's watch as your emotions towards the both of them become twisted and confused!"
I can't believe he cheated on her! T_T That is so sad! And I had already figured that Ryou liked her with the whole passive agressive thing.
AND WHAT'S UP WITH YUU?
"Why can't you be my boyfriend instead?" I wailed, barely audible from the cake foaming out of my mouth.
"Silly girl," Yuuichi let out a small smile. "Trust me, you wouldn't want that."
Why wouldn't she want that? Is there some depressing backstory from him that we have yet to find out? And does he like Shiine? Cause he blushed when he hugged him from behind.
As usual, awesome chapter, awesome story, and awesome writing. Update soon!
...Huh...Wow... I totally did not see that coming.
WHAT. THE. HELL. What was that? With the whole, "Oh, look! Your man-whore boyfriend is cheating on you and the guy you thought hated you is actually in love with you! Let's watch them slowly tear up their friendship and get into a big fight! And let's watch as your emotions towards the both of them become twisted and confused!"
I can't believe he cheated on her! T_T That is so sad! And I had already figured that Ryou liked her with the whole passive agressive thing.
AND WHAT'S UP WITH YUU?
"Why can't you be my boyfriend instead?" I wailed, barely audible from the cake foaming out of my mouth.
"Silly girl," Yuuichi let out a small smile. "Trust me, you wouldn't want that."
Why wouldn't she want that? Is there some depressing backstory from him that we have yet to find out? And does he like Shiine? Cause he blushed when he hugged him from behind.
As usual, awesome chapter, awesome story, and awesome writing. Update soon!
5/12/2012 c22 purple archer
Wow. Really intense scene. Really good chapter!
But what the hell is going on with Kei? He's starting to get a little possessive. I'm starting to not like him as much. Does he seriously like Hitomi, or he just playing her? And why is Hitomi so caught up with him? Very suspicous.
Good job!
Wow. Really intense scene. Really good chapter!
But what the hell is going on with Kei? He's starting to get a little possessive. I'm starting to not like him as much. Does he seriously like Hitomi, or he just playing her? And why is Hitomi so caught up with him? Very suspicous.
Good job!
5/10/2012 c18 purple archer
Hey! It took me two days of goofing off from homework, but I finally caught up with your chapters! Review time!
So, this is a pretty awesome story. It's really interesting, and the characters are really relateable. There's just enough angst and humor, with a wee bit of educational college stuffy stuffs that I don't understand. I really like this! You're writing is perfect, with barely any grammar or spelling mistakes, and I can really understand what's going on in this. Extremely well-written, this may be one of my favorite stories yet! Awesome job, keep writing!
Hey! It took me two days of goofing off from homework, but I finally caught up with your chapters! Review time!
So, this is a pretty awesome story. It's really interesting, and the characters are really relateable. There's just enough angst and humor, with a wee bit of educational college stuffy stuffs that I don't understand. I really like this! You're writing is perfect, with barely any grammar or spelling mistakes, and I can really understand what's going on in this. Extremely well-written, this may be one of my favorite stories yet! Awesome job, keep writing!
5/9/2012 c17 little fox demon
yay!...its's back!...oh wow, I missed this version (though the other one is fine too)...I can't wait to see the other old chapters and i hope you're able to tie in an ending to this one somehow
yay!...its's back!...oh wow, I missed this version (though the other one is fine too)...I can't wait to see the other old chapters and i hope you're able to tie in an ending to this one somehow
5/8/2012 c2 AznIdol
I like the concept, it's interesting. This is so gonna be one of my writing inspirations. I'm actually planning to write a story with a slightly similar concept like this.
Very good grammar too. I wish I could speak English well and be able to construct good paragraphs like you do. Great work! :)
I like the concept, it's interesting. This is so gonna be one of my writing inspirations. I'm actually planning to write a story with a slightly similar concept like this.
Very good grammar too. I wish I could speak English well and be able to construct good paragraphs like you do. Great work! :)
11/21/2009 c41 SakuraReiChan
Aww! I really love this story! Why aren't you gonna continue it? .
Well, just to let you know, I prefer "Kaine" better than "547 SERVICE". :) I hope you *somehow* continue this story! :3
Aww! I really love this story! Why aren't you gonna continue it? .
Well, just to let you know, I prefer "Kaine" better than "547 SERVICE". :) I hope you *somehow* continue this story! :3
5/24/2009 c40 ghurl00
OMG!
please update soon! pretty please!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
i lavv the storyline!
OMG!
please update soon! pretty please!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
i lavv the storyline!