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1a473
Shin-kun is a very cute character, though I'd have to say Yuuichi for one reason or another has got my vote. I loved this chapter, started of angst ended in comedy and switched on and off in between. If I could write like you, I'd have no angry readers- hahaha. I hope you can update soon!
xoxo-
ever free
1a473Shin-kun is a very cute character, though I'd have to say Yuuichi for one reason or another has got my vote. I loved this chapter, started of angst ended in comedy and switched on and off in between. If I could write like you, I'd have no angry readers- hahaha. I hope you can update soon!
xoxo-
ever free
2/5/2006 c22 3BandAidBandit
Ah.. He was going to beat up a little fat kid... over a lollipop and a booger. xD THAT IS SO FREAKING CUTE. Although If I were to really see a grown man run after a little kid with an intent to beat him up...That would be different. Well, as long as the grown man was hot.. Who cares. .xD
3BandAidBanditAh.. He was going to beat up a little fat kid... over a lollipop and a booger. xD THAT IS SO FREAKING CUTE. Although If I were to really see a grown man run after a little kid with an intent to beat him up...That would be different. Well, as long as the grown man was hot.. Who cares. .xD
2/5/2006 c22 anime-azn-angel
Shin-chan is an idiot. A funny idiot, but an idiot.
::glomps::
And I really like Yuuichi... It's nice that him and Ryou seem to have known each other for a while...
A lot of sudden info with Kei's Sara person... It seemed too random... But it was nice to see that Ryou helped him out...
...
::kills Kei::
Rika's adorable. That pudgey fat kid wasn't.
Go Shin-chan! Beat the 'theet' outta him! I would have!
And the angel concept... While you're on that topic, did you know that Abaddon is the angel of bottomless pits (Do not ask.)? Totally random, I know, but it sounds just as cool as Raziel and Azrael! Very nice though, and Ryou can draw! ::heart::
Sure... Of course the little comment about Ryou's hands meant nothing.
Hitomi's gonna be the first to figure out more about that, right? ::snickers::
Shin-chan is an idiot. A funny idiot, but an idiot.
::glomps::
And I really like Yuuichi... It's nice that him and Ryou seem to have known each other for a while...
A lot of sudden info with Kei's Sara person... It seemed too random... But it was nice to see that Ryou helped him out...
...
::kills Kei::
Rika's adorable. That pudgey fat kid wasn't.
Go Shin-chan! Beat the 'theet' outta him! I would have!
And the angel concept... While you're on that topic, did you know that Abaddon is the angel of bottomless pits (Do not ask.)? Totally random, I know, but it sounds just as cool as Raziel and Azrael! Very nice though, and Ryou can draw! ::heart::
Sure... Of course the little comment about Ryou's hands meant nothing.
Hitomi's gonna be the first to figure out more about that, right? ::snickers::
2/5/2006 c22 1Katsui Adonis
Wee! You *FINALLY* updated.
This chapter was fairly good..I liked the way you described Raziel.
1Katsui AdonisWee! You *FINALLY* updated.
This chapter was fairly good..I liked the way you described Raziel.
1/30/2006 c1 1Katsui Adonis
Gah! When are you gonna update?
*grows impatient*
But only because I love this story alot.
1Katsui AdonisGah! When are you gonna update?
*grows impatient*
But only because I love this story alot.
1/22/2006 c21 1Relinquish
Eh...really like the story, think you should keep writing it and make it really really long, lol. Um...I like Shiine's character the best, and I think once you've finished this story you should write many many more. Oh, and I also think you should read my story :) (please)
1RelinquishEh...really like the story, think you should keep writing it and make it really really long, lol. Um...I like Shiine's character the best, and I think once you've finished this story you should write many many more. Oh, and I also think you should read my story :) (please)
12/29/2005 c21 3BandAidBandit
I LOVE THIS STORY! It's SO...Well I'm torn between saying Cute, and Entertaining.
Aw...He saved her. Lol.. Update Soon!
3BandAidBanditI LOVE THIS STORY! It's SO...Well I'm torn between saying Cute, and Entertaining.
Aw...He saved her. Lol.. Update Soon!
12/28/2005 c21 stargazer starluver
hey, im so glad you updated! this chapter made me cry! i just love ryou's character! i hope we get to see his POV.curse that Maki's character though. update soon!
hey, im so glad you updated! this chapter made me cry! i just love ryou's character! i hope we get to see his POV.curse that Maki's character though. update soon!
12/27/2005 c21 52Liviania
I loved the scene of her practicing-it was very well done. And the comical ending contrasted the emotional content nicely.
Livi
52LivianiaI loved the scene of her practicing-it was very well done. And the comical ending contrasted the emotional content nicely.
Livi
12/26/2005 c21 18pinkfluffyoranges
haha so good, i love this story and it really makes my day when you update! i dont like kei much and i hope he wont be with hitome chan for long, long live ryou, his hotness is amazing.
18pinkfluffyorangeshaha so good, i love this story and it really makes my day when you update! i dont like kei much and i hope he wont be with hitome chan for long, long live ryou, his hotness is amazing.