for BLACK CHERRY11/11/2004 c1 who cares4
wow the update verison so RULES! rox mi bunni socks! upates are LOVED bi ME!
peace
wow the update verison so RULES! rox mi bunni socks! upates are LOVED bi ME!
peace
11/10/2004 c1 
2Red Angel777
This is great! I like this one better then the old one, don't know why though. Keep up the good work! ^^
2Red Angel777This is great! I like this one better then the old one, don't know why though. Keep up the good work! ^^
11/6/2004 c1 YumeNeko
Whoohoo! You're god! Love this story... I enjoy watching Shin-chan!
He's sort of like a grown-up crayon Shin-chan ^_^
Keep it up!
~Ichigo
Whoohoo! You're god! Love this story... I enjoy watching Shin-chan!
He's sort of like a grown-up crayon Shin-chan ^_^
Keep it up!
~Ichigo
11/4/2004 c3 juu-san
Wow! That was quick! Anyway, that was another good chapter.
Good luck with the next chapter!
juu
Wow! That was quick! Anyway, that was another good chapter.
Good luck with the next chapter!
juu
11/3/2004 c2 juu-san
I like this version better than the last one. Hitom's clothes also seem more casual than the ones she wore in the last version.
:thumbs up: Good luck with the next chapter!
juu
I like this version better than the last one. Hitom's clothes also seem more casual than the ones she wore in the last version.
:thumbs up: Good luck with the next chapter!
juu
11/1/2004 c2 samizdat
this is much better that teh first one..keep it up. lolz^_^
this is much better that teh first one..keep it up. lolz^_^
10/30/2004 c1 A. Pikachu
i just saw your bio, and i was amazed that this was written by someone who's close to my age. I must say that you are amazing.
A. Pikachu
P.S: I'm in the same location where you are. ^^
i just saw your bio, and i was amazed that this was written by someone who's close to my age. I must say that you are amazing.
A. Pikachu
P.S: I'm in the same location where you are. ^^
10/30/2004 c2 A. Pikachu
I find this entertaining, and I hope you can continue. I'm amazed by your knowledge of Tokyo. ^^ I assume you've lived there?
Looking forward to more of your work,
A. Pikachu
I find this entertaining, and I hope you can continue. I'm amazed by your knowledge of Tokyo. ^^ I assume you've lived there?
Looking forward to more of your work,
A. Pikachu
10/29/2004 c2 Kitsune-tejina
That was great! Hahahahaha! I don't get why Shin-chan is funny though... huh.
That was great! Hahahahaha! I don't get why Shin-chan is funny though... huh.
10/26/2004 c1 ro0kiE
nice chapter! i like reading this story when it was still under parody and until one day i found out it's not there anymore. I thought it was accidentally remove or something. I was a bit surprised that you moved it under romance and changed the plot. I really like the former storyline though i don't know where it's heading and i think i will like this too.. nice job for the first chapter. :D
nice chapter! i like reading this story when it was still under parody and until one day i found out it's not there anymore. I thought it was accidentally remove or something. I was a bit surprised that you moved it under romance and changed the plot. I really like the former storyline though i don't know where it's heading and i think i will like this too.. nice job for the first chapter. :D
10/22/2004 c1 Kitsune-tejina
What happened to the original? Oh well, I guess we'll all have to be patient to see this story go up and running. Seems good so far! Br very, very pervy cousin. Cheers!
What happened to the original? Oh well, I guess we'll all have to be patient to see this story go up and running. Seems good so far! Br very, very pervy cousin. Cheers!
10/22/2004 c1 Aharah Musici
What prompted the edit? Anywho I really like the edit better than the origonal (so far)
What prompted the edit? Anywho I really like the edit better than the origonal (so far)