for BLACK CHERRY10/23/2008 c38 Mitsuki
LOVE IT! update soon...this is really great i love the constant plot twist and drama! and the love triangle thing between Kei, Ryou, and Hitomi. Your writing is extremely refreshing in its humor and character development, to make a reader like and actually care what happens to a character is a great talent which i think you definately have (Hitomi's character is amazing...perhaps you can throw in a new love interest perhaps have them tour with a new HOT boy band?)! So all in all great story write more soon!
Ja'Ne
-Mitsuki
LOVE IT! update soon...this is really great i love the constant plot twist and drama! and the love triangle thing between Kei, Ryou, and Hitomi. Your writing is extremely refreshing in its humor and character development, to make a reader like and actually care what happens to a character is a great talent which i think you definately have (Hitomi's character is amazing...perhaps you can throw in a new love interest perhaps have them tour with a new HOT boy band?)! So all in all great story write more soon!
Ja'Ne
-Mitsuki
10/23/2008 c38 April
Yuu-chan will be finished (hopefully) soon! :D
Then I can colour him and then I can mooch off your ridiculous fanbase Muahahaha!
Lol. Kidding. But poor Yuu-chan~~ you shouldn't torture him, he's too cute D Though it seeming like they're all being tortured right now a little. I can't believe Hitomi's that innocent for being a rock star! Amusing as always~
Yuu-chan will be finished (hopefully) soon! :D
Then I can colour him and then I can mooch off your ridiculous fanbase Muahahaha!
Lol. Kidding. But poor Yuu-chan~~ you shouldn't torture him, he's too cute D Though it seeming like they're all being tortured right now a little. I can't believe Hitomi's that innocent for being a rock star! Amusing as always~
10/23/2008 c38 bakaplayer
lol happy 4yr anniversary ^^. update soon pls.
lol happy 4yr anniversary ^^. update soon pls.
10/22/2008 c38 
1DigiChar
:O Four years already? Wow, that's a long time :D
And Asami is pregnant! WHOA WHOA WHOA!
1DigiChar:O Four years already? Wow, that's a long time :D
And Asami is pregnant! WHOA WHOA WHOA!
10/22/2008 c3 9Aleksy The Flying Onion
Oh boy this next chappy should be interesting...
I like how the characters are developing. Ryou is so mean though! gah!
9Aleksy The Flying OnionOh boy this next chappy should be interesting...
I like how the characters are developing. Ryou is so mean though! gah!
10/22/2008 c2 Aleksy The Flying Onion
Hahaa Shinichi has me in stitches. Pretty tight writing for this chapter. Oh and I feel bad for Hitomi! I worked at McDonalds too...it...it sucked out my soul. X.X
Great job!
Hahaa Shinichi has me in stitches. Pretty tight writing for this chapter. Oh and I feel bad for Hitomi! I worked at McDonalds too...it...it sucked out my soul. X.X
Great job!
10/22/2008 c1 Aleksy The Flying Onion
Yah! Ai shiteru!
I really like this story so far! It's very well written, and like the feel of Tokyo, and the cousin is so funny. Good job!
Yah! Ai shiteru!
I really like this story so far! It's very well written, and like the feel of Tokyo, and the cousin is so funny. Good job!
10/22/2008 c15 1one little hollow
Hora, I SO shouldn't be reading this during class, Hitomi-san. -cough- Way to make me curious.
Aside from the awkward situations, poor Yuuichi. D= He and Shiine are my favorite characters and they both of shit this chapter. ;;
Awa...Asami-san's pregnant! =O You simply HAD to instill some drama, huh?
Regardless, kept me entertained during class. =D
1one little hollowHora, I SO shouldn't be reading this during class, Hitomi-san. -cough- Way to make me curious.
Aside from the awkward situations, poor Yuuichi. D= He and Shiine are my favorite characters and they both of shit this chapter. ;;
Awa...Asami-san's pregnant! =O You simply HAD to instill some drama, huh?
Regardless, kept me entertained during class. =D
10/22/2008 c38 meredith
OMG! SO ROCKIN'! Awesome ending. What's shin-chan gonna do?
OMG! SO ROCKIN'! Awesome ending. What's shin-chan gonna do?
10/22/2008 c38 yuae
Too much angst in one chappie! The RyouXHitomi relationship is a breath of fresh air but I still love Kei and Yuichi being hurt is so wrong... he's always passive... D:
Too much angst in one chappie! The RyouXHitomi relationship is a breath of fresh air but I still love Kei and Yuichi being hurt is so wrong... he's always passive... D:
10/22/2008 c38 HmongTuasNthi
OMMGE! What's gonna happen to Shin-chan?
Great chapter! Keep up the good work! And
thanks for entertaining me! =]
OMMGE! What's gonna happen to Shin-chan?
Great chapter! Keep up the good work! And
thanks for entertaining me! =]
10/22/2008 c38 mOOm
To me, it was really sudden with Shiine suddenly being all one-girl-only and serious in the later chapters when he said he had a girlfriend. I just
it was a cliche chapter really. Possible cheating, friend encouraging other friend to have sex when she's not sure she's ready, and omg! hi, i now you're at a gig and playing with the band and really busy right now and blahblah btwimpregnant.
I just :S
To me, it was really sudden with Shiine suddenly being all one-girl-only and serious in the later chapters when he said he had a girlfriend. I just
it was a cliche chapter really. Possible cheating, friend encouraging other friend to have sex when she's not sure she's ready, and omg! hi, i now you're at a gig and playing with the band and really busy right now and blahblah btwimpregnant.
I just :S
10/8/2008 c37 Meredith Noll
YOU ROCK! This was so good! But I really wanna see the others find out about Yuu-chan. Like either have Shine walk in him + Reji, or the whole band walks in on them, some sleazy paparazzi guy takes a picture of them and put in tabloids, maybe Hitomi accidentally blabs to Ryou or to the whole band, or even have Yuu-chan say it himself in some awkward situation like Shine or Kei trying to set him up with a someone they know. Just suggestions, I really wanna see everyone's reactions to Yuu-chan being gay. Please update soon.
YOU ROCK! This was so good! But I really wanna see the others find out about Yuu-chan. Like either have Shine walk in him + Reji, or the whole band walks in on them, some sleazy paparazzi guy takes a picture of them and put in tabloids, maybe Hitomi accidentally blabs to Ryou or to the whole band, or even have Yuu-chan say it himself in some awkward situation like Shine or Kei trying to set him up with a someone they know. Just suggestions, I really wanna see everyone's reactions to Yuu-chan being gay. Please update soon.