for Ice Queen10/19/2005 c1 cassie
i actually read this before but didn't review it and i shall say exactly what i think:i think it is marvellousi love the formati love the short lines (if i remember it was the style of the time last year - i remember other ppl writing poems like that)i love the subject of the ice queeni loved the words (have i said that)sum of all that = I LOVED IT! and i think you should teach me to write like that. love cassie
i actually read this before but didn't review it and i shall say exactly what i think:i think it is marvellousi love the formati love the short lines (if i remember it was the style of the time last year - i remember other ppl writing poems like that)i love the subject of the ice queeni loved the words (have i said that)sum of all that = I LOVED IT! and i think you should teach me to write like that. love cassie
10/18/2005 c1 
6Twisted Shadows
Wow.
I'm amazed that you got it all to rhyme - that can be very difficult! The way the words fit is like they are made for this poem. I like the rhythmn of the piece, the sort of running chugga-chugging as she read it.
The idea behind it is lovely too. I can just imagine this white-clad woman sitting upon the clouds, crying her lament to the world and changing the landscape whilst she does it. The short words are just that - short and sweet, and they help keep the rhythm of the piece going.
What else can I say? I love it. Favourite stories list you are on, for sure.
~ Twisted Shadows
6Twisted ShadowsWow.
I'm amazed that you got it all to rhyme - that can be very difficult! The way the words fit is like they are made for this poem. I like the rhythmn of the piece, the sort of running chugga-chugging as she read it.
The idea behind it is lovely too. I can just imagine this white-clad woman sitting upon the clouds, crying her lament to the world and changing the landscape whilst she does it. The short words are just that - short and sweet, and they help keep the rhythm of the piece going.
What else can I say? I love it. Favourite stories list you are on, for sure.
~ Twisted Shadows
6/12/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
That's beautiful; the poem drifts slowly like snowflakes towards its end. I love it!
39SliversofSilverPainThat's beautiful; the poem drifts slowly like snowflakes towards its end. I love it!