
6/21/2005 c1
30Weeba
Oh, wow. This is beautiful. You've really outdone yourself in the descriptive wording department, and the images are strong and engulfing. Absolutely fabulous job.
~Weeba~

Oh, wow. This is beautiful. You've really outdone yourself in the descriptive wording department, and the images are strong and engulfing. Absolutely fabulous job.
~Weeba~
2/1/2005 c1
11midnight dreams
It was like looking at a garden, scene-by-scene. From the puddles, to the roses, to the ivy. Very good, but can be improved. ^_^ You're very descriptive when it comes to sight, I really liked the scene with the roses. Keep writing.

It was like looking at a garden, scene-by-scene. From the puddles, to the roses, to the ivy. Very good, but can be improved. ^_^ You're very descriptive when it comes to sight, I really liked the scene with the roses. Keep writing.