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5/3/2007 c1 Murphy's Lawyer
Very well done.

- LL
7/20/2005 c1 u know who
hey listen with all ive been though i really conneced this... i want to know them as they know me ... theat exactly how i feel at times ... remeber u know who
7/8/2005 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
Wow... those are some darn nice eyes... Very romantic! I adore eyes on a guy, and you portrayed this so well! I have a song about eyes on my profile actually. Anyway, I thought you expressed the mood and emotion very well, the poem has a depth in it. Lots of meaning, I like it!
1/27/2005 c1 PAULA
I LOVE THIS POEM. ONE CAN REALLY FEEL IT. THIS POEM COULD DEFINITELY BE EXPANDED. IN A GOOD WAY, IT LEAVES THE READER WANTING MORE...AND I GUESS THAT IS THE WAY THE AUTHOR FEELS ABOUT THE DARK EYES - SHE WANTS TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THEM.

GREAT PIECE OF WORK! ESPECIALLY ON THE SPUR!
1/5/2005 c1 7Solita-Shadow
Very Cool. It's a great free verse and makes one wonder.

Solita
1/5/2005 c1 34SamanthaRodriguez22
I like this poem! Its really good!
12/26/2004 c1 37Peachez 24
Nicely written poem. Free-style are often done strangely but this one has a nice flow to it. Keep writing!

Peachez ^_~

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