for Slash6/6/2007 c1 Mally
I'm sorry, but there's too many fucking people out there that cut just for attention, or to be 'scene', for me to give a crap. :]
I know several people that, everday, come up to me, roll up their sleeves and say 'Oh my gawd, look what I did to myself last night.' And most of them cut the tops of their arms to keep from slicing anything fatal.
And the number of poems out there about cutting yourself and how people just don't understand is staggering. And usernames like 'razorbladexkisses' and 'suicidal' and popping up fucking everywhere. Face it, hon, hurting yourself has become a trend.
If you want to die so fucking badly then take a gun to your head.
Have a nice day. :]
I'm sorry, but there's too many fucking people out there that cut just for attention, or to be 'scene', for me to give a crap. :]
I know several people that, everday, come up to me, roll up their sleeves and say 'Oh my gawd, look what I did to myself last night.' And most of them cut the tops of their arms to keep from slicing anything fatal.
And the number of poems out there about cutting yourself and how people just don't understand is staggering. And usernames like 'razorbladexkisses' and 'suicidal' and popping up fucking everywhere. Face it, hon, hurting yourself has become a trend.
If you want to die so fucking badly then take a gun to your head.
Have a nice day. :]
9/27/2005 c1 
8Mr. Singh is back
First, I will criticize your views and clarify my own, then I will comment on the poem itself. Save the most important for last.
"(Prove that we can...) Is that why we chose our wrists?"
Well, yeah, maybe. If you were to cut just one of the arteries on either side of your neck, one of the arteries under your arms, or a fermora artery on the back of your leg just below your butt, you would die of blood loss much, much faster than if you cut your wrists.
Second, maybe proving you can isn't why you choose your wrists, maybe its why you choose to cut. There are many easier and quicker ways to do it than cutting your wrists. I was once suicidal, and I know what I'm talking about. I would think that most people who are truly sure of it get a gun.
I'm not saying that all wrist cutters are just attention whores. Most probably aren't. But the fact is, cutting the wrists in order to die really doesn't make any sense if you think about it, when there's quicker and easier methods to do it, even if all you can do is cut. That's why a lot of people assume that wrist cutters aren't sincere.
Now, the poem itself, could've used better structure, but you timed it just right, and your the way you present your point really is pretty convincing. Good sarcasm, too. Well done.
8Mr. Singh is backFirst, I will criticize your views and clarify my own, then I will comment on the poem itself. Save the most important for last.
"(Prove that we can...) Is that why we chose our wrists?"
Well, yeah, maybe. If you were to cut just one of the arteries on either side of your neck, one of the arteries under your arms, or a fermora artery on the back of your leg just below your butt, you would die of blood loss much, much faster than if you cut your wrists.
Second, maybe proving you can isn't why you choose your wrists, maybe its why you choose to cut. There are many easier and quicker ways to do it than cutting your wrists. I was once suicidal, and I know what I'm talking about. I would think that most people who are truly sure of it get a gun.
I'm not saying that all wrist cutters are just attention whores. Most probably aren't. But the fact is, cutting the wrists in order to die really doesn't make any sense if you think about it, when there's quicker and easier methods to do it, even if all you can do is cut. That's why a lot of people assume that wrist cutters aren't sincere.
Now, the poem itself, could've used better structure, but you timed it just right, and your the way you present your point really is pretty convincing. Good sarcasm, too. Well done.
5/29/2005 c1 47Genevive Russet
Beautiful use of sarcasm. I'd really like to see more of your work. Keep writing
47Genevive RussetBeautiful use of sarcasm. I'd really like to see more of your work. Keep writing
5/28/2005 c1 120hypocrite extrodinare
wow... thats sad... and kinda semented... but I shouldnt talk, cuz I used to cut... but now I'm ok... About your reveiw, no that wasnt going to be a stupid opinion about gay sex, because I'm a lesbian... but its my life, right?
120hypocrite extrodinarewow... thats sad... and kinda semented... but I shouldnt talk, cuz I used to cut... but now I'm ok... About your reveiw, no that wasnt going to be a stupid opinion about gay sex, because I'm a lesbian... but its my life, right?
5/28/2005 c1 misunderstood
i agree, although i feel it's something inside me complelling me to do it. Like a habit but part of my dna, does that sound sick? i love your work, the harse reality of the truth, hits hard. keep expressing urself.
i agree, although i feel it's something inside me complelling me to do it. Like a habit but part of my dna, does that sound sick? i love your work, the harse reality of the truth, hits hard. keep expressing urself.
4/7/2005 c1 8stained innocence13
damn dat person who said dat... how wud they know? hav dey felt wat we felt wen it happens? i dont tink so... screw dem... dey have no right to judge like dat...
8stained innocence13damn dat person who said dat... how wud they know? hav dey felt wat we felt wen it happens? i dont tink so... screw dem... dey have no right to judge like dat...
12/22/2004 c1 Ivriniel
That's just so true. I hate it as well when people think we do it just for getting atteintion..well, but it's sad that there are some people who in fact do it just because of that... Well, never mind, great poem.
That's just so true. I hate it as well when people think we do it just for getting atteintion..well, but it's sad that there are some people who in fact do it just because of that... Well, never mind, great poem.
11/26/2004 c1 13through these jaded eyes
you're totally right, real cutters don't do it for attention; they don't actually want people to know about it. but i must admit, ur words are little but strong, simple but meaningful.
13through these jaded eyesyou're totally right, real cutters don't do it for attention; they don't actually want people to know about it. but i must admit, ur words are little but strong, simple but meaningful.
11/18/2004 c1 141AllyCred
i loved this, i hate that people think cutters want attention, it pisses me off so much. but i loved the poem, its really honest and protrayed your feelings, eloquently. i loved it.
lots of love
AllyCred
141AllyCredi loved this, i hate that people think cutters want attention, it pisses me off so much. but i loved the poem, its really honest and protrayed your feelings, eloquently. i loved it.
lots of love
AllyCred
10/29/2004 c1 10Itite Yuku Eien Ni
This is acually good i thought it would say aload a crap about not cutting wrists and all cause once i did it not too deep i should give my friend that and tell her cause she does it and cuts her veins(sorry if you didnt wanna hear that) lol i loved it anyhoo ! Keep writing
10Itite Yuku Eien NiThis is acually good i thought it would say aload a crap about not cutting wrists and all cause once i did it not too deep i should give my friend that and tell her cause she does it and cuts her veins(sorry if you didnt wanna hear that) lol i loved it anyhoo ! Keep writing
10/28/2004 c1 1Syrins
RRD said you posted another poem... I mean RTD (I always do that) she's quite obsessed with your poetry... it's actually quite scary... she's going to strangle me for that... this was yet another really well done poem. It was really... beautiful... Thank you so much for reviewing my story, you have no idea how much it means to me to be heard.
1SyrinsRRD said you posted another poem... I mean RTD (I always do that) she's quite obsessed with your poetry... it's actually quite scary... she's going to strangle me for that... this was yet another really well done poem. It was really... beautiful... Thank you so much for reviewing my story, you have no idea how much it means to me to be heard.
10/27/2004 c1 7Syns
You finally posted another poem, hurrahurra... Doesn't that really piss you off when people talk about cutting as if they understand? It sure as hell pisses me off... okay, great poem again, really loved the way you wrote it... it was really... wow, yeah, that word will work. Anyways, update your story soon, you got to the CLIFFHANGER part and now I'm hooked...
7SynsYou finally posted another poem, hurrahurra... Doesn't that really piss you off when people talk about cutting as if they understand? It sure as hell pisses me off... okay, great poem again, really loved the way you wrote it... it was really... wow, yeah, that word will work. Anyways, update your story soon, you got to the CLIFFHANGER part and now I'm hooked...