for Another Possibility11/1/2004 c1 
17kristy23
*Wow*
That completely took me by surprise. I did not get it, even when we learned her name was Mary and his was Joseph. Then she mentioned a dream and suddenly, it clicked.
Your writing is wonderful, and the storyline a good plot did it not completely conflict with Christian doctrine, lol. I'm a Catholic, but I didn't take offense to it. It's just a story, and even if it was not, your entitled to your opinion.
But anyway, back to your writing. It was splendid, and your descriptions were wonderful. I think now I should go see what else you have written. Good job!
17kristy23*Wow*
That completely took me by surprise. I did not get it, even when we learned her name was Mary and his was Joseph. Then she mentioned a dream and suddenly, it clicked.
Your writing is wonderful, and the storyline a good plot did it not completely conflict with Christian doctrine, lol. I'm a Catholic, but I didn't take offense to it. It's just a story, and even if it was not, your entitled to your opinion.
But anyway, back to your writing. It was splendid, and your descriptions were wonderful. I think now I should go see what else you have written. Good job!