for Fall Together1/18/2005 c1 
6gwennybear
If it's okay to say...hmm...it's like Romeo and Juliet? Well...when Romeo thought Juliet was dead and he killed himself and Juliet woke up and found him dead and killed herself...you know? But it's really nice and sad...again, great poem!
6gwennybearIf it's okay to say...hmm...it's like Romeo and Juliet? Well...when Romeo thought Juliet was dead and he killed himself and Juliet woke up and found him dead and killed herself...you know? But it's really nice and sad...again, great poem!
11/9/2004 c1 1Cry-of-death
Brilliant i loved how you ended it..come to think you end all your poems brilliantly! i cannot compare to your work great
1Cry-of-deathBrilliant i loved how you ended it..come to think you end all your poems brilliantly! i cannot compare to your work great
10/29/2004 c1 7gothicrebal
yes ima read most of ur stories. i like this 1 to ive been there...er not gonna go there...but great poem.
7gothicrebalyes ima read most of ur stories. i like this 1 to ive been there...er not gonna go there...but great poem.
10/29/2004 c1 27doowopbop
That was an amazing poem. I really liked all the emotion in there. I mean, she found love right before she died...
that is awesome.
not the fact that she died before she could truley experience it, but, well, you know what i mean. At least i hope so.
Terrific job.
~*Veronique*~
27doowopbopThat was an amazing poem. I really liked all the emotion in there. I mean, she found love right before she died...
that is awesome.
not the fact that she died before she could truley experience it, but, well, you know what i mean. At least i hope so.
Terrific job.
~*Veronique*~
10/29/2004 c1 123GothicSpook
Aw thats so sad! I love it! The rhyming was excelent and had a really great flow. Well done!
123GothicSpookAw thats so sad! I love it! The rhyming was excelent and had a really great flow. Well done!